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Mon Aug 27, 2012 1:16 pm
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polinkacreations says...



After months of abscence from here, I feel an irresistible urge to review :)

As promised in the title, I put much time and effort in reviewing people, and genuinely want us all to be amazing writers. So, request away, and I guarantee that I shall get to your piece as fast as I can, one day of waiting a maximum.

What do I review?

Simple: whatever you want me to review.
Of course, I have much more experience in the field of poetry and prose, but I am open to new types of writing and plot. I'm not picky. :mrgreen:

Specifics?

If you'd like me to review something very specific eg characters in a piece of prose, or the rhyming scheme and flow in a poem, you are welcome to do so, just leave your wishes in the comments.

How harsh am I?
Not harsh, just honest... but that is for you to find out!

Thanks in advance for all the requests - to read your works will be a pleasure.
  





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Mon Aug 27, 2012 6:01 pm
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Twit says...



I'd love it if you could review these chapters! Comments on everything, but especially on characters, and please be as harsh as possible. Thank you!

ch1: work.php?id=96771
ch2: work.php?id=96956
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Tue Aug 28, 2012 3:07 pm
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firewood18 says...



Hello! Would you mind reviewing the intro to my novel? work.php?id=97077 Thanks so much :)
Formerly artemis18
  





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Wed Aug 29, 2012 8:06 pm
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Bobbywalker says...



Well I would REALLY love a review, but I haven't posted it on YWS yet (that is why I want a review). PM me when you see this, and I'll link you the TitanPad :)
"We are all equal, for we are all nothing"

Bobby. You so stupid.
  





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Tue Sep 04, 2012 11:37 am
Incandenza says...



can you review this please,

work.php?id=97218

thanks
“There's good self-consciousness, and then there's toxic, paralyzing, raped-by-psychic-Bedouins self-consciousness.”
― David Foster Wallace
  





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Tue Sep 04, 2012 6:22 pm
haven235 says...



Could you review this? work.php?id=97237 It's my first post so I think it'd need some help. Thanks.
  





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Thu Sep 06, 2012 2:41 pm
MiddleEarthGal says...



Would you mind to review my fanfic, Vipress? I would be very much obliged!
It isn't schizophrenia when you write about the voices in your head and get it published. That's talent.
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Sun Sep 09, 2012 8:52 am
cm57105 says...



Hi, review novel, PLEASE!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97299
If you don't have a trophy case that spins into a secret room with a press of a button, then your an idiot.

Need a review? You've come to the right person.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&p=1143828#p1143828
  








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