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Wed Aug 22, 2012 7:46 pm
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FlyMyButterfly says...



I will do reviews on any type of work. Leave the link in the comments and I will review ASAP.

Included in the review will be....
-my personal opinion
-overused words
-sentence variation
-cliches
-dictition
-vague words
& -consistency
  





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Fri Aug 24, 2012 9:38 pm
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Twit says...



I'd love it if you could review these chapters! :)

ch1: work.php?id=96771
ch2: work.php?id=96956
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Sat Aug 25, 2012 7:48 am
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SpeedyPencil says...



It'd be great if you could review this for me! : work.php?id=97043
Scissors cuts paper, paper covers rock, rock crushes lizard, lizard poisons Spock, Spock smashes scissors, scissors decapitates lizard, lizard eats paper, paper disproves Spock, Spock vaporizes rock, and as it always has, rock crushes scissors.
  





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Sat Aug 25, 2012 12:00 pm
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Crimsona says...



I'd really appreciate it if you could maybe review this short story: http://youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97037

Thank you :)
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Sat Aug 25, 2012 4:03 pm
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FlyMyButterfly says...



Twit wrote:I'd love it if you could review these chapters! :)

ch1: work.php?id=96771
ch2: work.php?id=96956



I will get the reviews done by tonight :)
  





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Sat Aug 25, 2012 4:04 pm
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FlyMyButterfly says...



SpeedyPencil wrote:It'd be great if you could review this for me! : work.php?id=97043


I will get the review done by tonight :)
  





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Sat Aug 25, 2012 4:04 pm
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FlyMyButterfly says...



Crimsona wrote:I'd really appreciate it if you could maybe review this short story: http://youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97037

Thank you :)


I will get ht review done tonight :)
  








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