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Tue Nov 06, 2012 3:59 am
DiskElemental says...



No holds barred.
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Mon Nov 19, 2012 5:01 pm
indieeloise says...



Realistic fiction short story request~ Would love a nitpicky review to this. I welcome harshness, as long as you can back it up with what you would do different! Thank you so much! :)

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Sat Dec 01, 2012 5:33 pm
aouther2b says...



Can you please review this? :D work.php?id=98132
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Thu Dec 06, 2012 2:38 am
DevanEWilliams says...



Much appreciated. :)

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Thu Dec 06, 2012 8:51 pm
Shady says...



Hey Hero!

I wrote another poem. I'd appreciate your awesome feedback. work.php?id=98198

Thanks!

~Shady

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