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Sun Jul 22, 2012 6:08 pm
ImHero says...



Hey! It's ImHero, John, here and I would like to review your writing.


"You're a good critic XD" - 567ajt

"I just thought that you gave a REALLY good critique of my story and I wasn't expecting it at all. You told me what you liked, and what you didn't, how you felt about the piece as a whole, and even mentioned certain components, phrasings, etc. [and other things] without overwhelming me. You gave me advice on how to make it better and you even explained your biases. Really, it was just a phenomenal review." - Yatta!


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4. Novel (currently not accepting, please read: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=95080&p=1066208#p1066208

Feel free to return the favor although you do not have too:
work.php?id=96577
work.php?id=96570
work.php?id=96571

A bunch more soon :)
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Sun Jul 22, 2012 6:22 pm
Lumi says...



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I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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Sun Jul 22, 2012 6:53 pm
ImHero says...



Lumi Done ! Very good read !
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Mon Jul 23, 2012 4:33 pm
Rainn says...



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Hello, ImHero! You may be as harsh as you desire.
"My Specialty is the Arts."
  





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Tue Jul 24, 2012 3:54 am
ImHero says...



Reviewed, pretty harshly!
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Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:40 pm
Rainn says...



Thanks (:
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Tue Jul 24, 2012 9:15 pm
Shady says...



Hey Hero!

A bit scared to ask after the review I just gave you...but could you review this: work.php?id=96620 for me please?

Thanks!

~Shady

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Tue Jul 24, 2012 9:50 pm
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ImHero says...



Promise no Bias, I thank you actually.
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Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:16 pm
Carlito says...



Songs? If so this please, if not feel free to ignore :)
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Thanks much!
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Wed Jul 25, 2012 4:09 am
ImHero says...



I count songs as lyric poetry
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Wed Jul 25, 2012 2:54 pm
Shady says...



Thanks Hero! Lots of help!

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:12 pm
SpeedyPencil says...



work.php?id=96663 Thankyou very much!
Scissors cuts paper, paper covers rock, rock crushes lizard, lizard poisons Spock, Spock smashes scissors, scissors decapitates lizard, lizard eats paper, paper disproves Spock, Spock vaporizes rock, and as it always has, rock crushes scissors.
  





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Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:14 pm
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Hello Again! I have another poem that I would like a review on. It's not a very good one, mind you.
Be as harsh as you like!
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Fri Jul 27, 2012 7:16 pm
TheAceofAll says...



Would you mind reviewing my work?
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Mon Jul 30, 2012 7:04 pm
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Rydia says...



Hi, I'd love a review on this please!
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