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Wed Jul 18, 2012 10:29 am
Noelle says...



I'm back! :) Christmas break is finally here! You have no idea how stressful this last semester has been. I've had way too much homework almost every night. I'm so relieved that it's over.

Anyway, I am re-opening this thread so here goes:

Hi there!

I'm so glad you decided to stop by. My name is Noelle and I want to read your writing.

A little bit about myself: :smt024 <-- this is me
I'm a college student who has plenty of time on her hands. I'm on here at least five times a day so I will be able to respond to your requests quickly. I can guarantee you'll get a great review. :smt023

What I will review:
poems - I focus on flow, punctuation, capitalization and the overall feel of the poem. And I took a poetry class last semester so I have a better understanding of poetry. I should be better at those reviews now.
short stories - I focus on spelling, grammar, and how the story feels/looks to a reader
novels - I focus on spelling and grammar as well as the ideas of the novel. (you can request anything up to three chapters. If you have more than three chapters written already that's a little too much for me to read and review.)
lyrics - I focus on word choice and the overall feel of the lyrics. Can it be put to a tune easily?

What I will NOT review:
articles/essays - sorry, but I'm not good at writing them so I wouldn't be much help :wink:
scripts - I just don't know much about them

I feel like my reviews may seem harsh at sometimes, but I am only interested in making your writing better. Please don't take anything personally. I'm not here to knock you down.

Sounds good? I hope so. Request away!
Last edited by Noelle on Thu Dec 20, 2012 8:22 pm, edited 6 times in total.
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Wed Jul 18, 2012 4:29 pm
stevie415017 says...



work.php?id=96193 these are the first two chapters of my book the war of night and day.
  





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Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:07 pm
Noelle says...



Anyone else out there who needs reviews??? I know you're there! Stop by :)
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:19 pm
SpeedyPencil says...



Well I have just one chapter up but if you would want to review it that would be great! work.php?id=96663
Scissors cuts paper, paper covers rock, rock crushes lizard, lizard poisons Spock, Spock smashes scissors, scissors decapitates lizard, lizard eats paper, paper disproves Spock, Spock vaporizes rock, and as it always has, rock crushes scissors.
  





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Mon Jul 30, 2012 12:12 pm
Sleeplessend says...



Check out my short entry its a random part of a story in my head work.php?id=96618
  





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Mon Jul 30, 2012 5:45 pm
Rydia says...



Hi, I'd love a review on this poem and will gladly take a look at anything you've written in return. There's no need to rush, whenever you have the time :)
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Tue Jul 31, 2012 9:12 pm
ImHero says...



Hey, I want to see if I can get another opinion before I change this one. It would be really appreciated!

work.php?id=96570
new profile: profile.php?u=36729
  





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Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:20 am
TheAceofAll says...



Who you mind reviewing my novel welcome to orba nova
work.php?id=96135
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Thu Aug 02, 2012 9:50 pm
BerlynnRae says...



Hey, I was wondering if you woud be willing to review my novel "Ghost of Theater Two" I have the prologue, first and second chapters done and they need LOTS of help. Thanks so much!
~Berlynn Rae

work.php?id=90746

work.php?id=90955

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Sat Aug 04, 2012 6:36 pm
Drakenor7 says...



Could you review this prologue for me? I'm new here and no one's reviewed it yet.

work.php?id=96762
Drakenor: If I have wings, why am I always walkin''?

Father: Because you don't know how to fly yet, silly.

Drakenor: I believe I can fly!

Father: I believe you can fall.

Drakenor: Look at me! Ahh! Turanamooo!!!

Father: I told him so...
  





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Sun Aug 05, 2012 10:53 pm
artsy says...



Something older of mine, but I'm in that editing mood, and was thinking about elongating it, so if you could check out Illiterate., that'd be awesome.
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Wed Aug 08, 2012 7:13 am
ShakespeareWallah says...



I wrote a sequel to a story I posted sometime earlier. Can you take a look at it . here's the link : work.php?id=96814
  





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Wed Aug 15, 2012 12:00 pm
Noelle says...



Anyone else need some reviews? I'm still here! And particularly bored so I need something to read :)
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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Wed Aug 15, 2012 9:17 pm
GeeLyria says...



Yay!

Um. I wrote a short story. :) English is not my native language, so I could use some help. xD

work.php?id=96911

Thanks, Noelle. =D <3
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Fri Aug 17, 2012 7:16 am
SpeedyPencil says...



Hi again it would be great if you could review work.php?id=96942 for me :)
Scissors cuts paper, paper covers rock, rock crushes lizard, lizard poisons Spock, Spock smashes scissors, scissors decapitates lizard, lizard eats paper, paper disproves Spock, Spock vaporizes rock, and as it always has, rock crushes scissors.
  








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