Young Writers Society

Hi! I'd love it if you could review

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ch2: work.php?id=96956

Please be as harsh as possible. Could I ask for your impressions on the characters in particular? Thanks!

can you review this for me please

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thanks

Hi Noelle, I would love for you to review my piece The Rather Odd Adventures of Daisy: Volume 1. It is a short story, kinda, it is a poem, kinda, it is for children but not really, I dont know... Review please. I would be ever in your debt. Thanks. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97126

Here you are.

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Thank you wonder girl.

Hey there, Noelle! Would you mind checking out an opening chapter for me?

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Please and thank you!

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Thanks in advance.

Hey Noelle,
remember you reviewed the story about the 'hypothetically' dead man.
Well, I have written another one of it.
would you please take a look at it.

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thanks

Hey Noelle, I've posted the second chapter of my novel. When you find the time, would you mind taking a look at it for me?

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Please and thank you!

Hi Noelle,

Thanks for the quick reply to my PM. I'm requesting a review for Ch.6. It's in two parts because it's a little long (5,000+ words). So I guess that means I'm technically requesting 2 reviews... More points for you right? Here they are:

(Part 1) - work.php?id=97366

(Part 2) - work.php?id=97367

I hope it will be straightforward and not too confusing to just jump into the middle of the story. Whenever you have time to get around to it of course. I'll be patient and wait.

Thanks in advance.

This Pretty please

Hello! Would you mind giving me a quick review on my poem, "Silent Moment"?

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Hey Noelle, when you get through all of your other requests, could you check out the third chapter of my novel for me?

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Please and thank you!

When you have the time

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Please and thank you.

Back up and ready to review!