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Fri Aug 17, 2012 9:57 pm
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PixieStix says...



I need you both to retry the links, please. : ) They didn't work.
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Mon Aug 20, 2012 8:59 pm
Celticmusicgirl says...



ok here is the full link to my work I would like you to review work.php?id=95601
here is a link to the other parts in order

part one: work.php?id=73506

part two: work.php?id=73832

part 3: work.php?id=74855

just in case you needed them so you will understand the story.
"No life is forever. We found and fought here. We loved and died here... The crops whither and the bones of hunger walk the sunken roads... The land has failed us... In dance and song we gift and mourn our children. They carry us over the ocean in dance and song.
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Mon Aug 20, 2012 9:58 pm
PixieStix says...



Thanks. I'll try to review it soon.
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Wed Aug 22, 2012 1:37 am
Aurrora says...



Hi! My short story is posted in three parts, but altogether its not hugely long (4,000 words). I would love, love, love it if you could read all three, but if you only read one or two that would be okay too. I am most worried about the middle, because I haven't gotten any feedback on that yet. Thank you so much!
work.php?id=96979
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Wed Aug 22, 2012 10:19 am
ShakespeareWallah says...



here's the link again...work.php?id=96765
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Thu Aug 23, 2012 11:58 am
ShakespeareWallah says...



work.php?id=96765

hope this one works.

Thanks a lot.
  





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Fri Aug 24, 2012 11:43 am
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PixieStix says...



Lol. I'll try to get all three of them done sometime over the weekend. With school and everything, It might be a little late. But it shall be done.
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Wed Aug 29, 2012 11:10 am
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TheClosetKidnapper says...



Pix!

This honestly doesn't have to be reviewed for a while. I know you have school and everything. So, no rush at all on this.

But my first chapter is lonely. So, when you have the time, I'd love your feedback. work.php?id=97055

Thanks!
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Thu Aug 30, 2012 5:29 pm
klara1882 says...



Hello :)

I would appreciate if you'd review this. I'm not quite sure what should be fixed but I'm not completely satisfied with how it feels while reading it. Any criticism and advice will help! :)

work.php?id=97088
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Thu Aug 30, 2012 9:32 pm
PixieStix says...



I shall do these in order...So that this isn't unfair or anything.

And Rocky, happy to see you posting stuff again. ;) I'll review you're chapter soon.

Celticmusicgirl
Aurrora
Puckerman96
Rocky (TheLuckyTurtle)
Klara1882

Will get it done soon, promise. I shall update this post, telling you which one's are finished.
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Sun Oct 07, 2012 5:57 am
Nerosns says...



Hey PixieStix, I posted on you wall like you suggested ( Or messaged you, I don't know the difference on this site) But you must have missed it :(

Anyways I would love a review if and when you feel up to it!
work.php?id=97530
If not then just lemmi know ^^.
  





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Fri Oct 12, 2012 6:23 pm
Deadman says...



I know your a busy person but when ever you can, I'd like you to review a couple of chapters from my book. Take your time too

Chapter one http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93753


Chapter two http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97019


Thanks!
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Fri Oct 12, 2012 6:35 pm
Sourdude16 says...



Could you please review my poem. Its under Poetry-Romantic. The name is Love.
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~Writing isn't a job or work. Its a passion and a gift.~ Personal quote
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Sun Oct 14, 2012 8:47 am
BaByLa1989 says...



hey i would love to have a review please thank you! :)
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Sun Oct 14, 2012 4:01 pm
PixieStix says...



This thread is now closed on reviews. I will open it up again later.
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