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Sat Jun 16, 2012 1:20 am
TheAceofAll says...



Hey, if anyone wants a review please post. I will do my best to give you a legit review and promise to be firm but fair.

I will NOT review
Poetry (It's an art and like all art, beauty is in the eyes of the beholder.)
I will do some fan fiction but only if it is a topic I know about (I don't want to give a bad review just because of my ignorance to the topic). Please post it and I will let you know if I can review it. :D

-Please Post
Last edited by TheAceofAll on Tue Aug 14, 2012 4:22 am, edited 2 times in total.
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―Chuck Palahniuk, Stranger Than Fiction
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Sun Jun 17, 2012 6:42 am
Rav1209 says...



hi wondering if you would review a chapter or two of my story. work.php?id=95880

I'll review anything of yours if you want!
  





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Fri Jun 22, 2012 4:14 pm
BradenPowell says...



work.php?id=96029

If you could review this I would really appreciate it!
“Faithless is he that says farewell when the road darkens.”
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Fri Jul 06, 2012 1:45 pm
Adriana says...



Hey, can you review this?
work.php?id=96282

You know, English is not my first language, so I have problems... If you can help me, I will be really grateful
It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose
it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been
missing until it arrives.

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Sat Jul 07, 2012 4:17 am
cm57105 says...



Hi,
Can you review my chapter, it is called Phoenix
If you don't have a trophy case that spins into a secret room with a press of a button, then your an idiot.

Need a review? You've come to the right person.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&p=1143828#p1143828
  





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Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:29 pm
ZaBodMoger says...



I have a couple chapters of a story and haven't gotten any reviews yet. I would really appreciate it if you would review mine. Let me know if you have anything you would like me to review. :)
work.php?id=96345
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Wed Jul 18, 2012 4:22 pm
stevie415017 says...



Hello i have two chapters done in my novel The war of Night and day. Please review and if you have any suggestion i will be happy to read them. Chow!
work.php?id=96193
  





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Fri Jul 20, 2012 7:13 pm
nutmegan595 says...



I've revised my unfinished so if you could read and review please: work.php?id=88999
  








Poetry is the art of creating imaginary gardens with real toads.
— Marianne Moore