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Hi! I'm hungry, hungry for Reviews that is! :D



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Sun Jun 10, 2012 5:18 pm
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laylaflame says...



No, seriously. I'm starving whilst writing this, I'm going to run to the kitchen as soon as I've finished.

But First!!
You wish to feed the beast you say?
Well... Lucky for you I'm not much of a picky eater :)
Though I especially love those delicous fantasy plots, and I won't discriminate against long stories (trust me, I know the pain your going through)
I also know a bit about romance, being a teenage girl and all..
And feel free to request reviews for lyrics or poetry,
I will do my best, and if I dont get it (since, I don't know, you may be just too awesome) then I will honest to god study it until I have something helpful.
Promise.

But keep in mind, I get angry when I'm hungry. Like the HULK!
So send me whatever you have, and I'll try to cover grammar, plot, key ideas, ect, and anything else you request!

Post links to as many works as you like below.

Now, if you'll excuse me, I have a date with a delicious spinach and cheese pull-apart :D
“Love is the answer
At least, for most of the questions in my heart, like
Why are we here and where do we go
And how come it's so hard”
― Jack Johnson
  





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Wed Jun 13, 2012 7:46 pm
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Benrobertringrose says...



Hello, could I get a review on this please?

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Thank you in advance! :)
  





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Wed Jun 13, 2012 8:38 pm
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BethJeff says...



Hey would really appreciate a review if you could please!

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~Beth :D
  





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Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:10 am
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JesusLvr18 says...



I would like some constructive criticism on my first chapter of my second novel! Please tell me how bad it is. Thanks!

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This story is no good, I'm almost beginning to believe it.
~Samuel Beckett


A lie has speed, but truth has endurance.
~Act of Betrayal by Lashea
  





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Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:06 am
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laylaflame says...



Thanks guys! I should have them done by tomorrow:)
“Love is the answer
At least, for most of the questions in my heart, like
Why are we here and where do we go
And how come it's so hard”
― Jack Johnson
  








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