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Gender: Male
Points: 1257
Reviews: 14
Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:12 am
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SirTobes says...



ever since the points came back, I've been questing to get more then my one meagre star. Ever since I was born, I've been questing to help those who are less fortunate.
Hence, I give you; Sir Tobes' Reviews for the Reviewless.
For those with no Reviews...

Spoiler! :
What I shall review-
I shall review-
1. Short Story.
2. Novels
3. Action/Adventure
4. Comedy
5. Sci fi/Fantasy
6. Horror
7. Mystery
8. Poetry
9. Fanfic (If i've read it/seen it etc.)
9. Lyric
10. Script
11.Romance
Everything and anything!

-I will not review you if you have two or more legitimate reviews-

My review styles-
Spoiler! :
1. The Basics- A quick overall summary of everything good/bad about your piece. Includes grammar/spelling check.

2. The Star Rating- A simple review, including your idea, how you presented it, a grammar/spelling check and an overall summary. I will put stars to each of these. ex. ****/*****

3. The Kiss and Cuddle- I'll smother you with and happiness, while still giving constructive criticism, then I'll send it off with a little pink bow!

4. House of Pain- Prepare to be killed. I'll rip your piece to shreds while still offering good advice.

5. The Mess- I will wrap up all of the above styles into one big pile of reviewness.

6. The chooose your own adventure!- You choose what you want in your review!

Request Template-
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Code: Select all
[b]Name of Piece:[/b]
[b]Genre:[/b]
[b]Link:[/b]
[b]Review Style:[/b]

Requested so far-
Spoiler! :

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There is no such thing as a stranger. Only friends we haven't met yet.

Previously Just Toby

  





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80 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 333
Reviews: 80
Mon Aug 27, 2012 4:41 pm
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polinkacreations says...



Hey SirTobes;)

Name of Piece: Callyptica (Prologue)
Genre: Science Fiction/Fantasy
Link: work.php?id=97080
Review Style: 5 - The Mess

PS. The novel is not yet complete, but I can assure you that it's in progress. If you have the time/patience/enthusiasm to continue reading and reviewing the novel, that would be great! (Prologue, Chapters 1+2 have no reviews yet.)
Thanks in advance! x
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss
  





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Points: 2806
Reviews: 935
Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:52 pm
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Shady says...



Dear Sir,

I think it is a wonderful charity that you're running for us poor, reviewless writers. :pirate3:

Name of Piece: Chapter Three (unnamed)- two parts

Genre: Fantasy- Action/Adventure

Links: Part one is here: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97113
And
Part two is here: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97115

My work may or may not make sense without having read the former chapters, and so I shall provide you with links for the prologue-chapter two:
www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95999
www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=96633
though they don't qualify for reviews. :D

Review Style:5- The Mess, focusing more on House of Pain, less on Kiss and Cuddle. :smt003

Thanks so much!

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]
  





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Gender: None specified
Points: 270
Reviews: 18
Tue Sep 04, 2012 10:54 pm
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shulchan says...



Name of Piece: Boring Old Me
Genre: Realistic/Dramatic
Link: /work.php?id=97241
Review Style: 5 - The Mess

Please be as harsh as possible!
  





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Gender: Female
Points: 924
Reviews: 4
Wed Sep 05, 2012 1:11 am
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chazbc4 says...



Name of Piece: Gauloise
Genre: General fiction
Link: work.php?id=97245
Review Style: The Mess sounds good.

Thanks a lot :) It's pretty long, and there will definitely be a host of mistakes as it's unfinished and unedited, but an opinion would be great.
  





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411 Reviews


Gender: Male
Points: 42428
Reviews: 411
Thu Sep 06, 2012 9:28 am
BenFranks says...



Name of Piece: La Mercz: L' Invasion de Paree I/II
Genre: Comedy Action Adventure
Link: work.php?id=97255
Review Style: As thorough as you can make it dear boy.

Thank you.
  





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Points: 358
Reviews: 67
Fri Sep 14, 2012 11:02 am
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cm57105 says...



Name of Piece: Alyasan Chapter 2
Genre: Fantasy
Link:

Chapter 2:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97342

If you want chapter 1 search up; Alyasan chapter 1

Review Style: The mess or house of pain…
If you don't have a trophy case that spins into a secret room with a press of a button, then your an idiot.

Need a review? You've come to the right person.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&p=1143828#p1143828
  








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