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Sun Apr 29, 2012 7:20 pm
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TheDayBeforeTomorrow says...



Hey guys, I've decided to start reviewing stuff! And I might just make a couple friends here. I've been kind of MIA for a while, but I'm back and don't plan on going anytime soon. :) So, stuff I will review is:

1. Poetry.
2. Short stories.
3. Articles and/or essays.
4. Novels or chapters of novels. (I'd love to do these, seeing as novels are somewhat ignored on YWS)
5. ...Make that pretty much everything! :P

Just making it clear, I'm not into sugarcoating. If something's terrible, I will tell you so and tell you what you should change. Conversely, if something's awesome, I will also tell you that.

That's it! Request away!

Edit: Um, guys. My exams start in a week and I really need to prepare for them. Plus, there's a lot of other stuff going on that I need to prepare for. Therefore, I'm not accepting any requests from today onwards. I promise I will review everything you guys already requested and I haven't done as soon as they are over.
Last edited by TheDayBeforeTomorrow on Fri Aug 31, 2012 4:11 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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People are made of places. They carry with them
hints of jungles or mountains, a tropic grace
or the cool eyes of sea-gazers. -EB

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Fri Jun 08, 2012 7:19 pm
BethJeff says...



Hey, would really appreciate it if you could review my first chapter for me please!

work.php?id=95816

~Beth :D
  





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Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:36 pm
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ZaBodMoger says...



I have a couple chapters of a story and haven't gotten any reviews yet. I would really appreciate it if you would review mine. Let me know if you have anything you would like me to review.
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Ever had something clawing at your insides? A creature you don't want to let out?
  





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Fri Jul 13, 2012 9:48 am
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TheDayBeforeTomorrow says...



First chapter reviewed, ZaBod. :)
Veni. Vidi. Vici.

People are made of places. They carry with them
hints of jungles or mountains, a tropic grace
or the cool eyes of sea-gazers. -EB

Love thy mangoes or die.
  





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Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:31 pm
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ZaBodMoger says...



Thanks a ton! :)
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Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:10 pm
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Rainn says...



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Hello :!: :smt031
Would you mind reviewing my poem for me?
"My Specialty is the Arts."
  





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Fri Jul 20, 2012 7:15 pm
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nutmegan595 says...



work.php?id=88999 Please review my unfinished story--I know, I need to get writing.
  





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Sun Jul 22, 2012 3:18 pm
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Bobbywalker says...



*huggles Tomorrow again*

You like reviewing novels. Could you review my first novel?

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"We are all equal, for we are all nothing"

Bobby. You so stupid.
  





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Mon Jul 23, 2012 7:36 pm
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TheAceofAll says...



Hi, I would love a review for the first chapter of my novel, Welcome to Orba Nova. If you have anything for me to review please let me know:)
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Wed Aug 15, 2012 6:38 am
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ShakespeareWallah says...



Hey Tomorrow again,
you said you review articles...so could you please take a look at this...work.php?id=96765

thanks a lot.
  





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Sun Aug 26, 2012 7:49 pm
mystogan says...



hey i have two pieces i would like you to review. They are both novels. One is already 13 chapters in, its called Leno's will, i don't expect you to read all of it, only if you are interested. the other one is my second novel called Cascades of Time. here is the link to all my works. Thanks in advance
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Wed Aug 29, 2012 7:26 pm
Tenyo says...



I have a novella that's completed but I'm only into the 2nd draft. It's 33k long, and I'll probably link you to a gdoc. Would you be willing to review it?
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Thu Aug 30, 2012 1:31 am
firewood18 says...



Hello! I have an intro to the novel I'm writing that I'd love for you to review! Thanks a lot :)
work.php?id=97077
Formerly artemis18
  





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Thu Aug 30, 2012 1:46 pm
klara1882 says...



work.php?id=97062 it would help a lot :)
But they all didn’t see the little bit of sadness in me.
  








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