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Sun Feb 19, 2012 6:29 pm
Inkswirl says...



Hi! Here's another willing reviewer :) I'll pretty much review anything - EXCEPT lyrics and scripts, don't know enough about writing those to feel confident in giving advice :P Anything else goes, so post some links below and I'll get on it right away :D

Oh, I tend to do line-by-line reviews, so quite detailed. If you want a more overall critique instead just let me know, otherwise be prepared for a lot of nitpicking :D

~Ink
~I happen to feel the degree of a person's intelligence is directly reflected by the number of conflicting attitudes they can bring to bear on the same topic~
LISA ALTHER




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Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:40 pm
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~Volant~ says...



Could you look at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93532 please? It's kind of in the middle of the story, sorry....it's for an OCT, which is kind of like competitive storybooking. XD Because I've mostly been drawing comics for the contest, my writing has really suffered. I'd appreciate your help!! <3

Thanks so much for posting here! It's really awesome of you! <3
Writer's Block: n. The term for when your characters are fed up with all that you put them through and go on strike.

My characters laugh at me when I tell them who's boss. :(




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Fri Feb 24, 2012 4:43 pm
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Inkswirl says...



Done, Volant :) Open for more requests people, don't be shy! :)
~I happen to feel the degree of a person's intelligence is directly reflected by the number of conflicting attitudes they can bring to bear on the same topic~
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Fri Feb 24, 2012 10:21 pm
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psudiname says...



could you review part one of my new short story?
work.php?id=93605
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.




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Mon Feb 27, 2012 10:03 am
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Inkswirl says...



Done, psudiname :) Anyone else? :D
~I happen to feel the degree of a person's intelligence is directly reflected by the number of conflicting attitudes they can bring to bear on the same topic~
LISA ALTHER




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Tue Feb 28, 2012 1:22 am
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Xyra says...



Yes, please!! I have an essay that needs some nitpicky love. work.php?id=93653
Please and thanks and love!
Xyra Pekkala
More Than Words Can Say
Forever Yours
Xyra Pekkala


PS I will love you forever if you review my story Maia (revised version!)
viewtopic.php?f=2&t=92852
I'll review something of yours in return :P




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Wed Feb 29, 2012 12:53 pm
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Inkswirl says...



Hi Xyra, your essay has been read :) Open for more requests!
~I happen to feel the degree of a person's intelligence is directly reflected by the number of conflicting attitudes they can bring to bear on the same topic~
LISA ALTHER




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Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:49 am
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emilybrodo says...



Could you please review this?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93524
“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

The game

Free reviews here




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Thu Mar 01, 2012 7:57 pm
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Inkswirl says...



Done, emilybrodo! :) Next please :D
~I happen to feel the degree of a person's intelligence is directly reflected by the number of conflicting attitudes they can bring to bear on the same topic~
LISA ALTHER




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Wed Mar 07, 2012 1:08 am
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SparkToFlame says...



work.php?id=93845
Hi! This is a fanfiction, based off the seires Sisters Grimm. :D Thanks deary!
If you have something you need reviewed in return, just drop me a line!
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Believe me...
There's no place like home."


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Thu Mar 08, 2012 1:02 am
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jemjive says...



So here's something I posted and I am eagerly awaiting a review....
work.php?id=93858
Please :)
Your motor's unstable,
Your like an
Undwinding
Cable
Car
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Sun Mar 11, 2012 10:52 am
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Inkswirl says...



Done for both of you, Spark and jem! :) C'mon people, request away!
~I happen to feel the degree of a person's intelligence is directly reflected by the number of conflicting attitudes they can bring to bear on the same topic~
LISA ALTHER