Young Writers Society

Hey howdy hey! DragonGirl11 here offering reviews!

I review very specifically, so expect lots of quotes. I tend to focus a lot on grammar and spelling, but of course I comment on plot, characters, etc. I will not be held responsible to review on a first-come-first-serve basis. I'll review in order of intrest, but I WILL review everything requested, if it fits my guidelines.

Types of works:

• Short stories is what I'm good at.
• Articles and chapters are ok, I guess.
• I'm not very good at critiquing poetry. I might try, but I'm really not the dragon for the job.

Genres:

• My absolute favourite thing to read (and review) is sci fi and fantasy. Bonus points if there are dragons.
• Romance is ok, but not eewy-gooey Twilight type stuff. As in, please have characters with some meat on them. Nothing with adult content, either.
• Fan fiction is cool if I know what it's based on, so ask first.
• I'd prefer stuff with low-ish levels of violence.
• All other genres are fair game.

Let the requests pour in!

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Yes, I know it's a poem, DG, but I know YOU'LL BE GREAT at critiquing it! Please do, dear. I'm on the way of finishing your piece. I like it, and so I plan to review it, soon...

Your pal,
Al

Done!

Hello DragonGirl . I have something interesting that i think that you would enjoy reading. Right now there are only two parts but im working on the third right now. You could just review one if you'd like . It does have some fantasy in it.
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Done! Both of them I can't wait to read the third one!

Anybody want a review?

Hello? Anyone? #poorlyveiled #bump

Hey DragonGirl11! This topic is still open right?

Edit: Would you look at this one for me:

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Thanks in advance!

Hey! i just wanted to know if you could review my post? its sort of a hunger games fanfic, but in a non character releated way. Its a short story so you should like reviewing it would appreciate it thanks! work.php?id=94744

Hey, this is just a really short story that I wrote about nature. Thanks,
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Would you like to read a scifi/fantasy novel?
Doesn't have dragons though, shucks :L

Hi, I just joined this site and was hoping for a review of a few captures of a fantasy book i started. It's called Welcome to Orba Nova. FYI, dragons are not in these chaptures but they play a big role later so if you like this, read my next post. My friends who have read it like it but i doubt they will give me a true opinion to spare my feelings. If you don't mind, could you give me a review. Oh, i know my first chapter is a little dry but it picks up fast.
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DreamingTheLife - done.
ShadowVyper - I did a review but my session timed out, and it was all like "Save as guest?" or something, so I tried to submit it but it didn't work. until I get back to you- it was good

As for the rest of you, sorry it's taking so long, but I've been busy. I'll get around to you soon, hopefully.

Hey, would you review these fews chapters that my friend omniyus wrote. It's fanfiction based off the Hunger Games he had to write in class.

I've got a few pretty long things to review, as you can tell, and I'm still rather busy. Post a link, and I'll review it sooner or later.