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Mon Feb 06, 2012 7:54 pm
NicholasStone says...



Short stories, lyrics, poems, but not pictures. I just can't do that. So ask away!
He stumbled slightly, the limp in his leg still there. He dared not to look at the place he used to call home. He could feel the heat from the fire, the fire that he himself had ignited. He blinked back tears, as he limped away.




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Tue Feb 07, 2012 11:55 am
TheClosetKidnapper says...



How about this?
work.php?id=93097

It's my short story. I have a few reviews but no harm can come from one more :P
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
twenty one pilots




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Tue Feb 07, 2012 1:30 pm
NicholasStone says...



Done.
He stumbled slightly, the limp in his leg still there. He dared not to look at the place he used to call home. He could feel the heat from the fire, the fire that he himself had ignited. He blinked back tears, as he limped away.




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Tue Feb 07, 2012 8:25 pm
NicholasStone says...



Oh yeah, I'm better at doing Sci-Fi and Fantasy than Romance. It just comes more naturally.
He stumbled slightly, the limp in his leg still there. He dared not to look at the place he used to call home. He could feel the heat from the fire, the fire that he himself had ignited. He blinked back tears, as he limped away.




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Tue Feb 07, 2012 8:51 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Thank you!
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
twenty one pilots




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Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:50 pm
tanya98 says...



can you please review my work ! Its :
work.php?id=93325
Thanks so much !!! :D
It's not gravity that's tying you to the earth but that one person - Jacob Black




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Sat Feb 11, 2012 3:11 am
NicholasStone says...



There you go, hope it helps!
He stumbled slightly, the limp in his leg still there. He dared not to look at the place he used to call home. He could feel the heat from the fire, the fire that he himself had ignited. He blinked back tears, as he limped away.