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Thu Feb 02, 2012 8:46 pm
Pilot says...



I like reviewing, but I haven't had much time to, and now my schedule is opening up. I'll review mostly anything, but just to be safe here's a list:

Action
Fable
Fantasy
General
Historical
Horror
Humor
Mystery
Mythology
Poetry
Romance
Sci-Fi
Spiritual
Supernatural
Thriller
Western
Young Adult


So basically anything you want. Here are my guidelines that I ask you to ever so kindly follow:

1. If it's a novel you wish to have reviewed, I will only review the wished chapter. Unless I fall in love with your writing and review the whole dang thing.
2. Say please.


So request away.
Last edited by Pilot on Wed Mar 21, 2012 9:12 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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Mon Feb 06, 2012 3:23 am
Stellabeam says...



hey,

If you don't mind, would you look over and comment my poem? Here's the link

work.php?id=93219

thanks
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Mon Feb 06, 2012 7:47 pm
gateway88 says...



Hi!
Could you maybe check this our for me? It's the second chapter, but you don't have to read the first. Here's the link
work.php?id=93196
Thanks! :)




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Mon Feb 06, 2012 9:30 pm
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Pilot says...



Sure, I'll do both! Hey gate, can you maybe repost the link, so it works correctly? Thanks ;)
I don't always write on forums, but when I do, I prefer YWS.

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Tue Feb 07, 2012 1:55 am
Pilot says...



@Stellabeam yours is all done!
I don't always write on forums, but when I do, I prefer YWS.

Sharpen your pencil, my friends.




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Sat Mar 03, 2012 1:23 am
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Pilot says...



Any requests? :D
I don't always write on forums, but when I do, I prefer YWS.

Sharpen your pencil, my friends.




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Tue Mar 13, 2012 11:30 am
Pilot says...



I'm still doing requests xD
I don't always write on forums, but when I do, I prefer YWS.

Sharpen your pencil, my friends.




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Tue Mar 13, 2012 6:31 pm
ENCR says...



Hi,

Please review my short story.

work.php?id=93898

Thanks




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Wed Mar 21, 2012 9:24 pm
Pilot says...



Ok ENCR! Review done! Sorry it took so long, I had school stuff to do.

Keep 'em comin' people! :D
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Sharpen your pencil, my friends.




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Wed Mar 21, 2012 11:20 pm
TheSunChildren says...



Hey, if you have LOTS of time then would you remind having a look at my first chapter please? i have already got some great feedback but i want to get as many reviews as possible in order to see if there is anything that is unseen that needs to be ironed out, thanks if you can do this mighty deed for it is 7k words and rather time consuming :D

here:
work.php?id=94099
Not many remember how life there began, in the lands amidst surrounding walls of stone and pools of deep darkness, but whilst they forget the secrets of the past, they begin to riddle the future with their growing lust for knowledge, greatness and power.




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Wed Mar 21, 2012 11:23 pm
Pilot says...



Yay, another customer! :D

So, I see it's quite lengthy. Longest one I've had to do so far! I see you like to write.

I'll have to get it done tomorrow, if that's fine with you. Tonight I don't have much time, so sorry. I'll get back to you with the review ASAP! :)
I don't always write on forums, but when I do, I prefer YWS.

Sharpen your pencil, my friends.