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Tue Jan 17, 2012 4:48 pm
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Dragongirl says...



'ello ladies and gents,

Okay, anyone who need a review I'd be happy to help.

Sci fic
Fantasy
Fiction
Horror
Poetry
Art

You name it, and I'll review it to the best of my ability.

The things that I really don't know squat about are,


Lyrics
Script
Photography

So you might not want me to review any of those three things for you. ;)

Now, lay 'em on me. ;)

~Dragongirl
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~ A word to the wise ain't necessary, it's the stupid ones who need advice.~
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Tue Jan 17, 2012 8:39 pm
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Jas says...



http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... =5&t=92719

I'd like more plot and character based review rather than nit-picks and grammar stuff. Thanks!
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apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Tue Jan 17, 2012 11:23 pm
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Dragongirl says...



Done!!!!!!!!

Now give me more.
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Wed Jan 18, 2012 9:21 pm
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Jas says...



http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... =5&t=92719

Hiya. It's um, the same thing but I've changed the ennnnnnnnnnnntire thing thanks to your help as well as a few others. Like, it's completely different. I'd really like another review on it, if that's okay, plot and character based, no grammar or spelling or sentence structure or whatever. Thanks!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Fri Jan 20, 2012 3:52 am
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Dragongirl says...



Hey Jas,

I have checked out your story and I will review it tomorrow!

*EDITED
Done!
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Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:36 am
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Rascalover says...



Will you please review my short story
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=92681
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html




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Wed Jan 25, 2012 6:39 pm
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firefly882 says...



Hey Dragongirl,

Would you mind reviewing my work (Paragon, Chp 1)?

I'm interested in any character behavior/plot inconsistencies, over/under-elaborating, some nit-picks, etc.

Thanks!
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Wed Jan 25, 2012 8:45 pm
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Dragongirl says...



Okay, Rascalover your story has been reviewed. Yay!!!!

Don't worry firefly, I will get to yours soon. :)

~DG

Hey, I'm going to have to close up shop for a little while here. My PC is really messes up and I can't review very good with out it. So so please not more request until get it fixed.

*firefly I will still review your piece, it just may take me a little while to get to it.
"Every writer I know has trouble writing." - Joseph Heller

~ A word to the wise ain't necessary, it's the stupid ones who need advice.~
- Bill Cosby