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Thu Feb 23, 2012 1:53 am
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Hey, me again! :)
Would you mind reviewing my poem? It's an assignment for school and is due Friday, so i need some feedback.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93580

Thank you!
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:57 am
ShootingStars says...



Done and done this morning. Next, please!
When you wish upon a star, makes no difference who you are. Anything your heart desires will come to you. -Jiminy Cricket

Don't be afraid to jump, to leap, to fly too far and don't be scared to touch the stars!




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Sat Feb 25, 2012 4:15 pm
MoonlightMayhem says...



hello, I am writing a novel called Keychain Magic.

Could you please review it for me? Here is the work link: work.php?id=93617
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Tue Feb 28, 2012 1:39 am
ShootingStars says...



Doooooooone! 8) Bring it on.
When you wish upon a star, makes no difference who you are. Anything your heart desires will come to you. -Jiminy Cricket

Don't be afraid to jump, to leap, to fly too far and don't be scared to touch the stars!




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Tue Feb 28, 2012 5:46 am
steward says...



Can you please review this for me? (BTW, you're already finished with reviewing the first three sentences..)

Thanks a lot!! :D :D :D
*stay depressed, just don't let it kill you* -.steward.-




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Tue Feb 28, 2012 9:30 am
emilybrodo says...



I would really appreciate it if you reviewed this first chapter of my book, just want to know how interesting it is.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93146
Thank you!!!
“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

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Tue Feb 28, 2012 11:57 am
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ShootingStars says...



I'm on it! I'll try to hurry!
When you wish upon a star, makes no difference who you are. Anything your heart desires will come to you. -Jiminy Cricket

Don't be afraid to jump, to leap, to fly too far and don't be scared to touch the stars!




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Thu Mar 01, 2012 1:04 am
VampireSenshi512 says...



If you have the time! :smt003

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93649
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Thu Mar 01, 2012 11:40 pm
psudiname says...



could you review this? it's sort of a hiest type short story work.php?id=93605
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.




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Sat Mar 03, 2012 2:18 am
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ShootingStars says...



Done, Steward! Moving on to Emily's!
When you wish upon a star, makes no difference who you are. Anything your heart desires will come to you. -Jiminy Cricket

Don't be afraid to jump, to leap, to fly too far and don't be scared to touch the stars!




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Tue Mar 06, 2012 9:02 pm
thebookworm says...



Can you review my short story and poem? Thanks!
work.php?id=93847 -Poem
work.php?id=93844 -Short story
"The one thing I regret about reading is not being able to live the lifes and adventures of the characters. Maybe that's why I want to write; to create a story that somebody else would want to live."- Me




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Thu Mar 08, 2012 1:00 am
jemjive says...



So here's something I posted and I am eagerly awaiting a review....
work.php?id=93858
Please :)
Your motor's unstable,
Your like an
Undwinding
Cable
Car
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Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:27 pm
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ShootingStars says...



Almost done! :P
When you wish upon a star, makes no difference who you are. Anything your heart desires will come to you. -Jiminy Cricket

Don't be afraid to jump, to leap, to fly too far and don't be scared to touch the stars!




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Sun Mar 25, 2012 6:52 pm
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ShootingStars says...



Sorry, I forgot to say done!
When you wish upon a star, makes no difference who you are. Anything your heart desires will come to you. -Jiminy Cricket

Don't be afraid to jump, to leap, to fly too far and don't be scared to touch the stars!




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Sun Mar 25, 2012 7:50 pm
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TheSunChildren says...



Hey :D
would you mind having a look at mine if you get the time, and i mean-get the time, you'll see why :wink:

all crisicism welcome,
would be much appreciated if you could share a review,
thanks,
Ash

work.php?id=94222
Not many remember how life there began, in the lands amidst surrounding walls of stone and pools of deep darkness, but whilst they forget the secrets of the past, they begin to riddle the future with their growing lust for knowledge, greatness and power.