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Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:26 pm
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catslikebooks2 says...



OK, so I will review anything 500 words or less besides romance, it can be more than 500 words, but I have the attention of a squirrel so anything more than that I will probably get distract- OH! SHINY! Yeah...so the quality of the review may change after 500 words.
So, because of the word limit I will review short stories and poems, anything but romance, but if you think you can win me over to the love side with your romance you can always give it a shot ;)
NOTE: I will review anything at all 500 words or less, but short stories and poems are my forte, and my review may change depending on what I am reviewing.

My reviews will include(if it is shot story or poem):
How the piece make me feel (I think that's important)
any spelling errors I see
comments on the rhetorical devices of the piece (metaphors, imagery, alliteration, ect.)
Comments on structure and flow of the piece

I'm not a very critical person, so it's hard for me to tell a person when I don't like a piece, but I will be as constructive as possible for all pieces I review. So, anyone want a review?
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Mon Dec 19, 2011 2:19 am
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Taxi says...



Hey. I have a piece that's "under 500 words"...

post945723.html#p945723 I'd appreciate feedback on it - and next time I promise I'll request a review for something that's not music. :P
  





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Mon Dec 19, 2011 2:23 am
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well, I'm a in choir...I might be able to make a decent review.
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