I'm new to poetry, but think that this work.php?id=98548 piece is fairly decent, and want to know if you agree. I was thinking of entering it into a competition, and would like to know if it's contest-worthy.
Thanks!
~Shady
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
"My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors, and trying to convince my shadows that I am someone worth following." - Rudy Francisco
I am always saying "Glad to've met you" to somebody I'm not at all glad I met. If you want to stay alive, you have to say that stuff, though. — Holden Caulfield
Also, link me to anything you'd like reviewed and I'd be happy to return the favour.
oh oh please and thank you!
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