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Audy's Star Fund! - Donate your Poetry



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Wed Apr 02, 2014 6:05 am
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katngo73 says...



Got some good reviews on this, but hoping you might give a more thorough thought to it? If not, comments are accepted!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=109919
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Sat Dec 03, 2016 12:16 pm
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Kazeybear says...



So, this hasn't been posted on in ages, but meh... Its worth a try.

To be fair, I'd appreciate a review on any of my works, but more specifically stuff with only two reviews.

Thanks!
~Kazey
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Thu Mar 02, 2017 6:05 pm
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Gravity says...



Oh Beautiful Ones

I have 2 reviews but neither of them gave me anything and I was a little miffed. Audy, will you help me?
And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

-Florence + The Machine (All This and Heaven Too)
  





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Tue Apr 18, 2017 9:16 pm
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VegasLights says...



I remember...

Forest Fire

Here is some of my poems. I have more on my account, under poems or poetry.
Previously Steam1244
  





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Thu Apr 20, 2017 6:29 am
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Lightsong says...



Strabismus

I need second review desperately. Please review it for me! c:
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Fri Apr 21, 2017 3:55 pm
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PrincessInk says...



Thoughts at Sunrise

This poem please :)
always daydreaming, always clumsy
  





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Mon Apr 24, 2017 11:46 am
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Audy says...



I'll get to yours sometime tonight @PrincessInk :) <3

Everyone else ~ keep 'em coming. This has been awesome motivation for me.
  





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Thu Apr 27, 2017 8:38 pm
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VegasLights says...



I don't know if you are still doing this, but if you are here are some poems!

Silence kills more than Curiosity

The Wilting Rose

Love and Loss
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Thu Jun 08, 2017 1:01 am
beccalicious94 says...



Hi! Here she is: Nostos

"poetry" was the best label for her, I hope you don't mind that liberty I took... :)
  





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Tue Jul 11, 2017 12:51 am
EKK15 says...



I would love for you to review these pieces, or just one of them!

As Things Became Real

Goodbye

Beach Sand

Thank you!!
  








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