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Thu Oct 13, 2011 8:05 am
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Yo!

I can think of a multitude of reasons why you're here, some flattering and some not. I'm hoping it's because you've heard how awesome I am and how I win, not only at life, but at reviewing as well. Oh yes.

Or there's, you know, that other thing. But we don't talk about that.



I will not review:
    Lyrics. Just cause.

    Anything that's highly rated for sex or language. A little language I'm okay with, so if you had something that was rated 18+ for a couple really strong swear words, that's okay, but not something that's continuously full of profanity.

    Harry Potter and anime fanfiction. I can give you a general review on a fanfiction story, like grammar and rhythm and general readability, but not anything specific on characters or the subject matter because I have only a vague knowledge of Harry Potter and don't watch anime.

I will review:
    Any kind, genre or colour of Fiction!

    Poetry. I can't promise it'll be incredibly in-depth, as I'm still quite a poetry beginner.

    Non-Fiction, if you ask nicely. It's not my favourite, but I'll do it because I love you.



So give me a link and a title and I'll get to your story as soon as possible!
Last edited by Twit on Tue Mar 27, 2012 5:26 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Fri Oct 14, 2011 1:41 pm
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Mr.Knightley says...



Twit wrote:. I'm hoping it's because you've heard how awesome I am and how I win, not only at life, but at reviewing as well. Oh yes. !



Woah, you too?! ;)

Do lyrics count as poetry? *puppy eyes*
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Fri Oct 14, 2011 3:56 pm
Twit says...



I'd completely forgotten that we even had a lyrics section... which tells you how often I review lyrics. But I can have a definite stab at it!
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Fri Oct 14, 2011 11:30 pm
espeon says...



Hi there!

Do you think you could work your magic on this right here ? :D

It's in the General Articles section, so I guess that counts as everything else, right? :3
It's an arguement piece.

Hope it'll be worth your time!
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Fri Oct 14, 2011 11:47 pm
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Thanks a million! :D
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Mon Oct 17, 2011 9:46 am
Twit says...



Done, both of y'all!
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Tue Oct 25, 2011 12:19 am
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Good evening, could you take a look at this piece? topic89346.html
Been waiting for a review for bit, I figured I'd go and get one, thanks!
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Tue Oct 25, 2011 7:39 am
mikepyro says...



twould most enjoy a lookie here.
my newest piece Bob the Tumor.
all dialogue, looks long but mainly due to format, people who read it breeze through though.

topic89251.html

Just another amazing story by yours truly :D
  





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Tue Oct 25, 2011 11:50 pm
MSDavies says...



Hey! I've been working on a novel (on my 9th chapter currently) and I have three chapters posted onto this site. It would be awesome if you could review the first one. And hey, if I succeed on "hooking" you then I have no problem if you want to continue reading. Please and thank you. Keep on writing.(:


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Wed Nov 02, 2011 2:47 am
joshuapaul says...



Hello Twit,

This needs your careful eye, please?

JP
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Fri Dec 16, 2011 10:17 am
Twit says...



*bumping cause the holidays are here!*
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Fri Dec 16, 2011 6:48 pm
AstridBartleby says...



Hello! I'd love it if you could review my short story.
viewtopic.php?t=91689

Thanks so much!

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Sun Dec 18, 2011 7:42 pm
Misfit says...



I'm new here so I don't know how to post a link to my topic. But it's one of my chapter works titled, "May the World Burn, Chapter One". It would be great if you could review it, and please, be as critical as you can. I need to make this as good as I possibly can. Thanks and forever may you write.


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Wed Dec 28, 2011 5:37 pm
AquaMarine says...



If possible, I would love a review on this. First chapter of a new novel! :)

Thanks in advance. <3
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Thu Dec 29, 2011 5:51 pm
Twit says...



Done everyone!
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