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Tue Nov 22, 2011 1:07 am
Jas says...



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Ice cream, chocolate strawberries and many rainbow unicorns will be rewarded to you if you review this. :] Please and thanks!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Tue Nov 22, 2011 7:39 am
peanutgallery007 says...



I would love it if you could review my poem for me. Something seems wrong with it but the two comments it has don't really help.

Thanks (:
Have a peanut =)

Try your hand at my poetry contest!

Proud LGBT supporter.
  





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Sat May 12, 2012 10:58 am
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Lumi says...



Now Open For Business

Come get yer soup.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Thu May 17, 2012 10:39 am
GrymmRipper says...



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If you could review this poem of mine it would be really helpful!
Thank you so much! :D
Sanity is nonexistent. =_=''

Need reviews for this poem : work.php?id=93702
Thank you so much!
  





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Tue May 22, 2012 4:18 pm
Karzkin says...



Do your thing, baby.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

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Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:07 am
MischiefManaged says...



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Really need to develop this and got no help at all. So if you may so kindly review it? :D
Thank you so much!
  





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Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:03 pm
SkyLore says...



I was hoping that maybe, possibly, you could review this for me...

Not too hound you or anything...I won't turn into the Hulk if you say no.
Wait...I can't make any promises about that one, sorry.

-shy's away-
  





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Wed Aug 08, 2012 5:58 am
Lumi says...



Open again. I still have backtrack to handle with the dudes and dudettes who've requested before, though.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Thu Sep 20, 2012 4:23 pm
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LadySpark says...



Pretty please? If you have time, that is. Is this alive? xD
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  








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