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Sat Dec 10, 2011 5:54 pm
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Blues says...



Done that!

... well aaaages ago. I forgot XD

Next, please!




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Fri Dec 16, 2011 10:44 pm
Jas says...



Spam, you say?

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=91163

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=90250

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=89662

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=88160

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=88380

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=88026

Most of them are 'The Space Between Infinity' but a few are short stories. :]
You don't have to do all of them if you don't want.
I hope I don't seem rude requesting so much.

:]
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but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Fri Dec 16, 2011 10:48 pm
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Blues says...



Oh, not at all! :D

I'm off to bed now so I'll try and do them tomorrow, if possible.

Woo hoo!

Edit:

I'm gonna put all the links and make a mini-checklist for myself :)


http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=88160

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=88380




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Mon Dec 19, 2011 7:19 pm
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Blues says...



All done!
Next please!




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Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:03 pm
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sockmonkey says...



dear ahmadblues, could you please review my work-in-progress story i am not sure how to post a link but the story is called inspector woolsome chapter one it is in historical fiction.thanks...sockmonkey away
its built on lies...just like the mafia the cia and fox news...sockmonkey...away!




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Mon Dec 26, 2011 5:37 pm
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Valentine says...



greetings.

I would love if you could review this: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=91865

Thanks so much! Message me if you want a review in return!
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Wed Dec 28, 2011 3:40 am
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BlueAfrica says...



Hey, despite the fact that we're not doing the whole points thing right now, would you be willing to review a novel for me? I only have up through chapter 4, part 1 written - that's mostly what I want a review on is that chapter, but probably you'd have to read the stuff prior to that so you'd know where you are anyway...

Anyway, here are the links to all chapters in case you're interested:

chapter 1, part 1: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 50#p912250

chapter 1, part 2: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 81#p914681

chapter 1, part 3: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 01#p919401

chapter 2, part 1: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 20#p922520

chapter 2, part 2: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 39#p926839

chapter 3, part 1: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 43#p928443

chapter 3, part 2: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 78#p929478

chapter 4, part 1: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 06#p942706

Wow, that was long...




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Wed Dec 28, 2011 5:31 pm
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AlfonsoFernandez says...



Hello AhmadBlues, could you review my story called Achilles. It's fantasy and I hope you like it! :D Thanks!
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Thu Dec 29, 2011 10:43 pm
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Blues says...



Sockmonkey, Valentine, I finished yours :) Well. A few days ago anyway XD

Blue, Alfonso, I'll have them done for tomorrow, when I wake up. Thanks for request! :)




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Fri Dec 30, 2011 12:07 am
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TheClosetKidnapper says...



Hey Ahmad, would you mind reviewing the first few chapters of the novel I started? I got a few good reviews on my first but after that the numbers went down and I haven't been getting the help I think it needs. Thank you sooo much! The work is called Recruited.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Fri Dec 30, 2011 12:55 am
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Carina says...



Heeeey there.
I'm new around here, and I just started a prologue of a story I had in my mind for months on end.
The prologue leads up to, like, literally a novel, so it's kind of important.
I'd like a bit of input, whatever it may be, I don't mind.
Thanks! :3
I'll review back if you want.
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    and I will send her lots of chocolates for being awesome."—Iggy
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Fri Dec 30, 2011 7:25 pm
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Blues says...



Awesome! More requests! ^_^ I'll have them done as soon as possible.




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Fri Dec 30, 2011 9:34 pm
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qaralynn says...



Hai there my ducky =D *gives bread*

viewtopic.php?f=365&t=92160
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Fri Dec 30, 2011 10:30 pm
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Blues says...



Qenguin! Thanks for posting the link. I'll get to it when I'm done with the other reviews ^_^




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Fri Dec 30, 2011 10:38 pm
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AelitaLienne says...



Hello! I heard you were a good reviewer, so would you mind reviewing my short story Motion in a Minute?

Thanks so much!

Aelita
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