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Sun May 20, 2012 8:32 am
steward says...



Kindly review The Dreamer - Chapter II? Thanks! :D :D
"Stay brave." -Steward





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Sun May 20, 2012 1:12 pm
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Blues says...



Hi everyone! I'll be getting these requests done today, so I'll keep a checklist of what I have reviewed.

Completed:
-oNegativeZero
-TheAceOfAll
-DudeMcGuy

To do:
-Steward





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Sat May 26, 2012 7:42 am
Blues says...



All done!



Send in your requests by the millions! I'm on a review challenge on Sunday so I'll need all your help to review things on Sunday.





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Fri Jun 01, 2012 1:19 am
DudeMcGuy says...



Hello Blues,

It's DudeMcGuy again. Well, if you need additional material then you can review this:
work.php?id=95343
work.php?id=95346

This is the first chapter of my novel (edited version split into two parts). You recently reviewed the prologue for me (which was great btw) and this is what comes next.

I should warn you though, it is not a direct continuation of the previous part (Four new characters, new time period and such).

I don't know if that is enough material for your review challenge, but it's all I have! I hope you enjoy it.
When I was young I used to have problems finishing my sentences, but now I





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Fri Jun 01, 2012 10:12 pm
MonoTheElderish says...



If you could, I'd appreciate you looking through this portion of my WIP novel.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95236
Eve Online Nerd. Poke for Babble.





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Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:18 am
DudeMcGuy says...



Hey Blues!

Chapter 2 comin' at cha'! : work.php?id=95667

If your not too busy that is. . . Whenever you get around to it is fine. I'm a patient person :)
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Mon Jun 04, 2012 9:02 am
Blues says...



Thanks, Dude! 8D I'll get it done soon, but then after I'll have exams. So good timing! ^^





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Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:50 am
SirTobes says...



Hey Blues.
No stress,
just wanted to know if you could review this?
There is no such thing as a stranger. Only friends we haven't met yet.

Previously Just Toby






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Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:13 am
Blues says...



Sure! :)

I'm afraid that will have to be my last review request I'm going to be taking. Exams and stuff. I'll reopen after the exams, however!





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Sun Sep 30, 2012 10:56 am
Blues says...



And open to new requests!





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Sun Sep 30, 2012 2:24 pm
Sins says...



Hey Blues, I'm going to be a pain in the butt and request some of your awesomeness.

Could you check out my latest novel for me? I have three chapters up so far, but you can read/review as much or as little as you want because the thought of reading three might make you want to run into a window.

Here's the first chapter: work.php?id=97263

You can find the others via that if you want, and you can do what you wish with them! Thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Tue Oct 02, 2012 1:23 am
hopeispeace says...



What should I call this? Uh, realistic fiction short story type fantasy thing... sure, that works.

work.php?id=97464

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~HopeisPeace





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Tue Oct 02, 2012 1:23 am
VampireSenshi says...



When you have the time :D

work.php?id=97491
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<NE1>

NIGHT is always watching...





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Wed Oct 03, 2012 4:24 pm
EmmVeePi says...



Would very much like a review of my short fantasy/adventure fiction piece The Rather Odd Adventures of Daisy Vol 1 Please and Thank You work.php?id=97126





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Sun Oct 07, 2012 6:19 am
Nerosns says...



Hey! Would love a review if you'd be so kind ( Or have time, either one ^^, )
work.php?id=97530
It's a single chapter, the first in fact to a story. If you get round to it I hope it floats your boat ;)








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