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Charlie II's WRFF Thread

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Sun Oct 09, 2011 7:13 am

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Charlie II says...

Thank you, Rosey. Any more?

I am thankful for laughter, except when milk comes out of my nose.
-- Woody Allen

You don't need to be fast. You just need enough tortoises.

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Sun Oct 09, 2011 7:18 am

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Lumi says...

You know I love you.

PenguinAttack: Interpretive dance is never appropriate.

LouisCypher: I did kick the Detective's liver.

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Sun Oct 09, 2011 9:03 am

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Laurence Branson says...

Can you review this: viewtopic.php?t=88396

Thank you so much

The worse thing I can be is the same as everybody else.
A.S.

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Sun Oct 09, 2011 6:11 pm

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stelagineva says...

Hey! Can you review the first chapter of my new Fantasy novel?

Thanks a bunch!

This is your life and it's ending one minute at a time.

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Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:31 pm

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joshuapaul says...

Charlie, why don't you take a look atthis for me.

Last edited by joshuapaul on Mon Oct 31, 2011 7:43 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Read my latest

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Sat Oct 29, 2011 11:50 pm

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MeanMrMustard says...

If you wouldn't mind.

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Mon Oct 31, 2011 7:44 pm

joshuapaul says...

You asked for this and this.

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Mon Oct 31, 2011 10:03 pm

Starrywolf says...

pretty please?

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Tue Nov 08, 2011 4:51 pm

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Gheala says...

Hey Charlie. Here is the piece I so wish you would review:

post933049.html#p933049

Thanks a million.

I'm back to my YWS after months of disappearance, hoping that I'd gain the immunity of books and quills against the harmful realism of our world.

In case this made no sense, I'm just saying that I'm happy I'm back!

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Wed Nov 16, 2011 3:16 am

joshuapaul says...

Please Charlie, would you review this.

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Sat Mar 24, 2012 12:50 am

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joshuapaul says...

Hello Charlie,
This brought me back to YWS. I need a critical fix, you see. It's for a contest, that is due in May - it needs a lot of work.

#TNT

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Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:05 am

Charlie II says...

I'll take a look at it this weekend and send you a PM to let you know when I'm done.

I am thankful for laughter, except when milk comes out of my nose.
-- Woody Allen

You don't need to be fast. You just need enough tortoises.

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Wed May 23, 2012 8:41 am

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Lumi says...

Maybe?

I'll reciprocate. (a-bom-bom-bom) And all that jazz.

PenguinAttack: Interpretive dance is never appropriate.

LouisCypher: I did kick the Detective's liver.

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Thu May 24, 2012 8:36 pm

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psudiname says...

this is a the first chapter of a novel I'm still working on. don't hold back.
work.php?id=95420

if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.

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