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Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:46 pm
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Demoness says...



Hii my dear, feared fellows!

As many of you might have noticed I've gotten half-crazy reviewing lately and therefore I've opened this thread so that anyone who's looking for a review containing my opinions on your work, well - Shout here!

Good to know though;
* I rarely go in to the grammatic stuff since I seem to have lost my editing looking-glasses
* I'm obsessed with structure, so count on getting a comment on that
* I reward with spiders, mostly icky ones, but I've got a couple of hairy ones too :)

Soo, what do I review?
- Poetry is my favorite thing, and I review any poetry so if you write poetry.. Well, you've come to the right Demon!
- I do short stories aswell, and any genre part from "historical" I'm more of a chemistry person you see.
- Novels - I will review novels and longer stories aswell. BUT, and there's a but, only if I'm hooked at the beginning or n certain other cases if I like you very, very much :D

Eeh, so - Attack me with requests and I'll do my best! :D
"Some say the world will end in fire;
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice." - Robert Frost
  





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Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:53 pm
shadowraiki says...



I don't think people need to attack you with reviews as you are attacking them with reviews :3. I don't have anything for you to review for now, but I'm sure people will come your way.
If words are just letters put together, why do we decide on what they mean?

I step away from the grammar to review the story.

I don't do poetry.
  





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Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:55 pm
Demoness says...



Haha, that might be true x))
But maybe people have some hidden, forgotten piece that i haven't managed to dig up... who knows! :D
"Some say the world will end in fire;
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice." - Robert Frost
  





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Sun Aug 14, 2011 9:06 am
pettybage says...



Asking for a demonic examination here, for a demonic book. I hope it hooks you, it has space travel, conspiracies, guy on the ran, love story, and tentacles :D And telekinesis.
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Sun Aug 14, 2011 11:58 am
pettybage says...



...That was amazingly quick!!! Perhaps even... demonically quick?! :twisted:
  





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Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:13 pm
Kagi says...



Hey!

This ---> viewtopic.php?t=86924 if you please.
Got YWS?

If, when you mean to type yes you type yws, you know you belong. :P
  





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Sat Sep 03, 2011 4:55 pm
Ultimateanon says...



Could you review my chapter four for me? I only have about half of it up, since I'm still owrking on it though. I want to know what I need to change before I continue on. :) If you want, you can read the first three so you can know more about the novel (It is an actual novel that I plan on one day publishing, so it may be a little long for the chapters).

Thanks! :D

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