Young Writers Society

Hi everyone! So I have finally got wifi in my house which means I can get on here anytime I want! Which also means I have more time to read and review pieces. I am a very avid reader and I really do enjoy reviewing, so let me review your piece! (pretty pretty please?)

What I will review: short stories, poems (though I'll just be commenting on the flow and the overall feel of the piece), lyrics, novels (but only if it's the first couple of chapters and I can easily go back to read prior chapters), scripts, are & photography

What I will not review: nonfiction, fanfics

How I review:
1. I will say hi to you because it's polite ^_^
2. I will tell you how much I liked it
3. I will tell you what you did good and what you did bad
4. I will quote any punctuation/speling/grammatical errors and fix them in red
5. I will give you any suggestions I can think of that will make your piece better

So, request away!

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HI!

If you could take a look at that it would be much appreciated

~Retro Disco666

Hey Noelle! Could you review this for me please? It's a little old but I think it 's been neglected a little.

Thanks!

Hey Noelle, can you please review this piece (viewtopic.php?t=85766)? It's for the 150 word contest. However I want you to first read Kafka's comment below, keep what he said in mind, then read the story and then write your review. Thanks.

Hi there, could you please take a look at Chapter two of my novel please? ^^ I'm a litle skeptical abut that chapter. If you want too you can also take a look at chapter one. :D The genra is Fantasy just so you know. c:

Hiya,
Please review the first chapter of my novel (romance) : topic84706.html
Thank youu in advance!