Young Writers Society

Hello! I'm looking to review some works and figured why not make a topic on "Will Review For Food"? So, here I am.

First off, I would like to say that I am not at all good at grammar. I'll probably never say anything about the grammar unless there is something I really need to point out to you - which will probably be very rare. In my reviews, I tell you my favorite parts, things you need to improve (but I won't ever tell you what to change, because it is YOUR writing and not mine. I wouldn't want reviewers on my work to be acting as if it's their work and saying which part to remove, etc. So, I won't do that to you.) - so basically just what I liked and disliked.

Works I will review:
- General Short Stories
- Fantasy
- Any Poems

Works I will NOT review:
- Historical (sorry, I love that genre but I'm not much help when it comes to reviewing it)
- Science Fiction
- Fanfiction
- Lyrics
- Extra long novels - but I WILL review them if they are seperated by chapters or parts

Also, I will only review things that are G rated (E+). No adult content please, I am only fourteen.

Keep in mind that sometimes I am not able to get on the computer. Being so, it may take a few days for me to review your requested work. But I will try my best to review it as soon as possible.

~Me

Hey Nathalie! I would really appreciate it if you reviewed my post God's Gift. THis is my first post. Waiting for your comments.
yours
Abhishek

Abhishek's review is done.

Do you do parts of novels? I have a fantasy novel that I would like reviewed but the forward is already reviewed it's chapter three I need. Do you take requests like that or do you prefer to start from the beginning? And I don't know how to post the topic ID and get it to a link so if you do want to review it you'll find it under Ice Cold Fire: Chapter Three Pt 2. Thanks in advance, even if you don't review it:)

The URL is viewtopic.php?t=70164
That's the best I can do because I don't know how to get it as a link:)

Hey! Here's a poem I was wondering if you could review!

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Thanks !

stargazer9927 and Boolovesyou reviews are done.

Could you review my work Adolescent Immortals? please first chapter, first post.

werewolfgirl's review is done.

Hey there. I was wondering if you would review my short little novella The Mermaid's Song? It's not going to be very long, pinky swear. But I was wondering if you could give me some tips. topic84159.html

Cheers,
Luxe

I'd very much appreciate a review of my piece The Yellow Sheets. It's 12+, but I think that should be okay for you.
(Because Pirates make everything better)

luxevampwolfwithwand and mikepyro's reviews are done!