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Thu May 12, 2011 2:44 am
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Dreamwalker says...



Alright, so I believe I'm all caught up with my reviews? I think so! :)
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Thu May 12, 2011 2:46 pm
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Cramerx says...



Could you tell me what you think of this?

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Sat May 14, 2011 4:23 am
IKnowAll says...



In advance, I was writing for up to four hours nonstop on the first one for 9 days or so, and I didn't stop to correct errors often... I went back and corrected some recently and have fixed most of the ones there were, but there's still a lot of uncapitalized letters at the beginning of sentences and forgetting to put periods at the end of dialogue...
this one is about telepaths... viewtopic.php?t=80792 it's super long so take your time if u want... I haven't written in it much for awhile but I started working on it again recently...
this one is science fiction... viewtopic.php?t=80824 basically there's a war going on and this pacifist inventor creates a cloning machine that he reluctantly uses for war...
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Wed May 25, 2011 7:06 am
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cupcake says...



Could you please review my poem?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=81193
Thanks in advance! :D
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Wed May 25, 2011 11:31 pm
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GeeLyria says...



Could you review my poem? :) topic81316.html
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Fri May 27, 2011 1:23 pm
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Dreamwalker says...



Ah, it always feels good to finish poetry reviews! Anymore requests?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Fri May 27, 2011 1:24 pm
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fluteluvr77 says...



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I'd like a review!(: I'm so rusty, it's awful...XD
Would you like anything reviewed in return?
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Sat May 28, 2011 10:11 pm
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Matthews says...



Do you wanna review this, please? viewtopic.php?t=81451 Thanks!
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Tue May 31, 2011 2:20 am
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Dreamwalker says...



And, once again, I am finished! Anymore requests?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Tue Jun 07, 2011 2:07 am
Keitaron777 says...



Will you please review the prologue of the novel i'm working on? viewtopic.php?t=82001 . Much appreciated thank you!!
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Wed Jun 08, 2011 4:40 am
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Loller65 says...



Heya! Since you're cool, and I'm cool, you should review this!

topic82043.html

Thanks in advance, pal!
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Wed Jun 08, 2011 3:36 pm
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DakotaK says...



Hi Dreamwalker,
I have really enjoyed reading your work and I'm looking for a good reviewer to hunt through my novel and tear it apart. I'm desperate to either make this thing into something worthwhile or get rid of it if it's awful. I am awful at judging my own work. If you would be willing to take a stab at it that would be awesome! Thanks so much:)

novel.php?id=1142

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Looking for peeps to review my novel:)

novel.php?id=1142




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Fri Jun 10, 2011 2:47 am
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servant4christ says...



Review my novel? I am aware it needs work and will take the best critique you can give me...I am not sensative :)

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Fri Jun 10, 2011 3:56 am
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Dreamwalker says...



Okay guys, so I know I'm behind in my reviews and I will catch up. Just I'm gone this weekend.

Sunday I should be up and running once more.

~Walker
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S




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Sun Jun 19, 2011 2:48 pm
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Dreamwalker says...



Alright, so now its just the two novels! That means, it will take me a couple days, if not a week or two, to finish all of them. Its does mean, though, that I am up for more requests!

I do like novel reviewing, but one needs a break to do other reviews as well, ne? ;D

~Walker
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S