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Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:08 pm
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Caterpillar says...



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A poem which is not a poem in many ways and I'd like you to enlighten me about that because I is the Caterpillar and not the wise one.
  





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Fri Apr 27, 2012 9:15 pm
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Dreamwalker says...



You know the drill.

Reopened and awaiting those requests, my lovelies >:3
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:25 am
Jas says...



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Pretty please? I'll have a response to your other review (thank you btw) tomorrow and I'll definitely review anything you want/need reviewed. <3
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:43 am
FallenAngel97 says...



Hello! So, I was wondering if you could review this poem for me?
work.php?id=94747
My heart grows cold
My spirit grows weak
I'm losing my faith
I'm losing my grip...
  





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Sun Apr 29, 2012 2:10 am
Dreamwalker says...



Done and done.

Anymore?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:15 am
Dreamwalker says...



I'm a little disappointed :c.

No requests?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Mon Apr 30, 2012 11:02 am
Twit says...



I have a request. It's called... VictoryFREEDOMBob.
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


#TNT
  





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Mon Apr 30, 2012 11:52 am
Jas says...



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Lol I'm so annoying.
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:05 pm
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Dreamwalker says...



Jas wrote:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95019

Lol I'm so annoying.


Never, dear! I'd be happy to ;D
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Sat May 05, 2012 6:24 pm
Ikerot says...



Heeeey. First time with Walker :D

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It's a scifi/fantasy story which has been rewritten :L
"Good begins with evil, and evil is here to stay." - From The Sovereign
  





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Wed May 09, 2012 6:25 pm
LadySpark says...



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please and thank you.
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  





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Mon May 14, 2012 12:21 am
Dreamwalker says...



Sorry, dears! I'll be to those reviews shortly if you're still interested in having them. Busy is as busy does, unfortunately!
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Thu May 17, 2012 12:41 pm
Jalmoc says...



Hi Dream! :D I posted a story for English and I'd like it if you could just rip it to shreds and give me all my mistakes. :) I'd really appreciate it. :D What did you call it? Sir Walkington review? Sorry if I got it wrong. :) It's a fantasy fiction story. :) If you would please review it, the link is posted below! :D

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If you don't take a chance, you'll always live your life in regret, so let your heart show it's true colors and admit your feelings!

Tis not the blade that took your life, but the Assassin behind it.

When Reality has all but fallen away, recreate your own world
  





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Sat May 26, 2012 10:53 pm
zohali93 says...



Hi there!

I'm not sure what the name of the genre I'm writing.(I'm not sure so I choose general)

If you find the time could you review this for me please?
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Do the people think that they will be left to say, "We believe" and they will not be tried? (29:2)
  








You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling