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Thu Jan 03, 2013 12:23 am
aouther2b says...



I loved the review you did on another piece of mine, would you mind ever so terribly reviewing another piece??

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Thu Jan 03, 2013 12:52 am
JohnLocke1 says...



I would love it if you would review this. It's fantasy, but I hope that is alright!

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Thu Jan 03, 2013 1:04 am
Dreamwalker says...



Alright, finished aouther2b's. Now, onto JohnLocke1's.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Fri Jan 04, 2013 11:28 pm
CinnaThePoet says...



Hi Walker, I would really appreciate if you could review this. Please and thank you :)

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Fri May 01, 2015 4:30 am
Dreamwalker says...



Re-opened
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Fri May 01, 2015 4:36 pm
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Daisuki says...



Is this really true!? *checks date*
I can't pass this up!
with respect to distant stars
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Fri May 01, 2015 5:42 pm
Dreamwalker says...



Daisuki wrote:Is this really true!? *checks date*
I can't pass this up!
with respect to distant stars


Definitely true and definitely done, m'dear ;)
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Sun May 24, 2015 6:21 pm
paula08 says...



Hi Dreamwalker, can you review this poem for me please? I would really appreciate it.

The mind of music
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Wed May 27, 2015 1:36 am
Dreamwalker says...



All done, paula08!
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Wed May 27, 2015 2:42 am
artybirdy says...



I posted the poem in 2013, but recently edited it completely. Can you review it for me?

To The One I Love(d)

Thanks!
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Sun May 31, 2015 2:16 am
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Dreamwalker says...



Sorry for the late review on that! It is, however, all done.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Mon Jun 08, 2015 7:50 am
artybirdy says...



Can I request another review?

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Mon Jun 08, 2015 1:52 pm
Dreamwalker says...



Certainly! What would you like reviewed?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Mon Jun 08, 2015 6:45 pm
artybirdy says...



Father Doesn't Like The Noise *Edited*

TRIGGER WARNING: CONTENT ABOUT ABUSE.

Thanks!

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Sat Oct 22, 2016 11:22 pm
Dreamwalker says...



Re-opened fam. Hit me up while supplies last.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  








I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy