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Fri Jun 03, 2011 11:05 pm
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lilymoore says...



Want a Poem?
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.




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Sat Jun 04, 2011 5:33 pm
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theotherone says...



Lilymore, your poem has been reviewed. :) Anyone else needs a review?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Fri Jun 24, 2011 4:43 pm
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Alliaaryn5665 says...



Hi,

Uhm, this is kind of random, but can you review anything and everything you have time for? If you can't, that's fine. :]

Farewell,
A.
You think you are any different from me,or yourfriends?Or this tree?If you listenhard enough,you canhear every living thingbreathing together.You canfeel everything growing.We are all living togethereven if most folksdon't act like it.We all havethe same roots,and we are allbranches of the sametree.




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Tue Jun 28, 2011 9:20 pm
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theotherone says...



Hello A. :)

I did a few reviews, and the rest is coming soon, don't worry.

Anybody else is brave enough to ask for a review? ;)
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:28 pm
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Jas says...



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That please? :D
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Wed Jun 29, 2011 5:39 pm
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theotherone says...



Jas, I finished reviewing your short story. It's was really a good read. :)

Anybody else?

-Other One
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Thu Jun 30, 2011 8:28 pm
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Skins says...



Hey, theotherone! :)

Could you review a random part of my novel for me? I've recently edited it, so I'd like to get some fresh opinions. I know this is a bit of a big ask, so if you don't want to do it, that's totally fine. There's a brief summary at the top of the post though, so that should help you out if you are happy to take a look at it for me.

Here's the link: topic81113.html

Please and thank you!
Cat.




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Thu Jun 30, 2011 9:52 pm
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Yuriiko says...



*raises hand* Me please!

Here is a short story. :)
"Life is a poem keep it in the present tense." -Sherrel Wigal


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Fri Jul 01, 2011 2:18 am
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theotherone says...



Skins and Yuriiko, your reviews are done respectively. Hope I helped. :)

Well, is there anyone else up for a review from me?

-Other One
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Sun Jul 03, 2011 1:50 am
Sunshine says...



Yep, a lovely food poem up and at you.

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We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good one, eh? Because it was, you know. It was the best.

-The Doctor (11)




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Sun Jul 03, 2011 4:20 am
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theotherone says...



Sunshine! Yes, your review is done.

Well, any other YWSer? ;)
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Sun Jul 03, 2011 11:08 pm
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reaganpark says...



Can you review all three chapters of my story, Keeper? Or just the third one if you don't want to spend that much time on it.
Thanks!
WE ARE DAUGHTERS of our Heavenly Father, who loves us, and we love Him.




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Mon Jul 04, 2011 3:09 am
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theotherone says...



Reagan, chapter one and two are done. I'm going to attack the third one tomorrow, I promise. :)

Someone else wants a review from me? ;)

-Other One
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Mon Sep 26, 2011 10:48 am
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UrbanNomad says...



Hello,
have a read of my poem if you've any time...
topic87751.html
Thanks in advance, Oliver




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Sun Oct 09, 2011 6:42 pm
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theotherone says...



Review is done. :) Next one?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466