Young Writers Society

hello! I've been looking through the forums and your reviews are popping up everywhere! I would love love love if you could possibly critique my poem? I'm new to YWS, but am having so much fun, already! I've always enjoyed writing poetry/short stories, but now I have a place to become a better writer and improve my prose. I'd adore some good feedback!!!

this is it

thanks!

Hey Kendallelise Your review is done. Next review?

I would really appreciate a review on my poem:
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Thanks so much!
~Devan

Your review is done, Devan.

Anyone else?

Hey there! *high five*
Could you review my poem, please? It's not long, but I would like an opinion. Thanks!
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Hello Polinkacreations, your review is done, hope it helps!

Is anyone up for a review from me?

Could you review what I have done so far of my novel? It's fantasy, just for you to know. Chapter one is found here. Chapter two is here. Thank you! =D

Alphonso Fernandez, your review is done. Sorry it took me so much time. Anyone else up for a review?

I wouldn't mind a review on my piece as well, please?
Voil'a monsieur theotherone (if you are female don't take offence, I say this all the time..)

> A poem please : http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 17&t=92055

Written In Stone, it's done! So... Will someone ask for another review?

Hello,

Would love a review on this if possible,

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Thanks, much appreciated!