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Thu Feb 17, 2011 10:26 pm
theotherone says...



Hello everyone!

I know there's a lot of people who offers their reviews... I'm one of them now. ;)

My reviews normally consist in nitpicks and an overall impression on the story. I might also give you little tips for your plot, depending on your style.

I will review (includes Short stories and novels):
:arrow: Romantic
:arrow: General Fiction
:arrow: Art and Photography
:arrow: Poetry

I will consider reviewing (includes short stories and novels):
:arrow: Fantasy
:arrow: Fanfiction (If I know the story it comes from.)
:arrow: Non-fiction. (depends on what it is.)
:arrow: Historical Fiction

Don't even ask for me to review Science Fiction, because I will only read the first few sentence and give up. ;)
Now, I don't think I missed anything... Please, give me some work!

PS: If you ask me to review your novel, please tell me which chapters. I will be more then happy to review it all if you would like, but you have to tell me you want it all reviewed and be patient. I have a life outside of YWS after all. ;)

-Other One
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Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Fri Feb 18, 2011 2:18 am
Kafkaescence says...



Can you take a look at this? viewtopic.php?t=76474

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Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:30 am
Loller65 says...



My Poem 2 can be found here. viewtopic.php?t=74808

Review?
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Mon Feb 21, 2011 11:44 pm
theotherone says...



Kafka- review is done!

Loller- Done as well.

Thanks for the work guys. Is there anyone else? :)
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Tue Feb 22, 2011 2:34 am
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topic76609.html
Will you review my poem, Handwriting?
Thank you so much.
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Wed Feb 23, 2011 9:31 pm
theotherone says...



Kat, your review is done. :) Anyone else who wants to give me a little work?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:16 pm
amiemalamie says...



OO I have a novel I'd love for you to review :)

It's in my signature.
Check out my novel My Life of Insignificance

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Mon Feb 28, 2011 12:01 am
theotherone says...



Chapter One, two and three are done. :) Anyone else?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:05 pm
TeenWRiTER says...



I'ld like a review or my novel. It's a romantic novel . . . I'm new and this is my first work so I hope it's good though thanks so much!!!! topic77869.html
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Mon Mar 21, 2011 1:04 am
theotherone says...



teen writer, your review is done. :) Well... Is there anyone else that wants a review?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Mon Mar 21, 2011 11:57 pm
Rascalover says...



Will you please review chapter three of my romantic novel viewtopic.php?t=77710 please
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html




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Tue Mar 22, 2011 1:14 am
theotherone says...



Rasca, your review is done as well! Hope it helped :)

Somebody in need of a review?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Tue Mar 22, 2011 10:55 am
xDudettex says...



Hey Otherone!

You've given me great reviews in the past and I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look at the first chapter of my new romance novel 'Sometimes.' It's my first attempt at writing romance as a genre, rather than just a sub-plot, and I'd really like to know what you think of it :)

viewtopic.php?t=77741 - link to chapter one.

Thanks!
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Wed Mar 23, 2011 12:59 am
theotherone says...



Dudette, your review is completed! Anyone else has any work for me? I'm ready to tackle it. ;)
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466




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Wed Mar 23, 2011 6:00 am
xxSmileyBubblesxx says...



Could you take on this one? topic78024.html

Thankee!