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Sun Sep 11, 2011 4:13 pm
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joshuapaul says...



Here it is.

topic87441.html

Ten pieces, 13000 words, go on....
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Wed Sep 14, 2011 1:20 am
Twit says...



If you have the time, I'd love a review on Serpent's Teeth [2] :)
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Sat Sep 17, 2011 3:04 am
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Audy says...



Hello!

I know poetry isn't your favorite, but I would really appreciate it. :) Thanks!




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Thu Sep 22, 2011 5:40 pm
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carbonCore says...



Heya Kafka!

I've edited my story [Professor Morgenstern] a little bit from its initial conception. You said you would look over it, but I'll drop this over here as a reminder (if you still want to, that is). I'd love to hear your opinion.

topic87712.html
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Thu Sep 22, 2011 5:55 pm
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Lava says...



Kaff! I hope you're not busy and stuff.

Just a couple of paragraphs - part of a project I'm working on - topic87926.html

I'd love your thoughts on even at least one paragraph.
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Mon Oct 03, 2011 7:29 pm
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TaylaChase says...



Hi, do you think you could consider review a piece for a contest? It would be really appreciated!

Here's the link;
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I understand if you don't want to though XD

Thanks!
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Wed Nov 02, 2011 1:53 am
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joshuapaul says...



Andhere is another one. Same vein as the last, though a little stronger, in my opinion. Also, don't feel you must respond to these requests. Casting over your WRFF, I quickly noticed I am easily the most prolific suppliant.

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Tue Nov 08, 2011 9:16 am
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Persy says...



ohai.

If you're busy, don't worry about it, but it'd be muchly appreciated.

Thank ya kindly, good sir.




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Wed Nov 16, 2011 3:20 am
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joshuapaul says...



Has enough time passed for another request?

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Tue Nov 29, 2011 4:45 am
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Jas says...



Hey Kafka,

Can I get a review on this ---> post939303.html#p939303 ?

Thanks!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Sun Jan 08, 2012 2:51 am
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confetti says...



Hola. I'd love a review on this.
If you don't mind, I'd rather it be more of an 'umbrella view' than nitpicks. I usually don't have too many grammar errors, if any. Be as harsh as you want, thanks!
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Mon Dec 17, 2012 9:43 pm
Kafkaescence says...



Waking this up.
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