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Here's chapter one of "The Effect". you may review it but a lot of people have and I really need chapter 2/3 reviewed. This is just to give you some background info.

Rae, I'm done with yours. Good luck with everything! :s

RAWR!
I just posted... whatever this is, and I'd like a review. It's really unorganized, just thoughts as they came to me. Maybe they could be something, one day.
If you're up to it : post859152.html#p859152
Yours, Pen

Penprincess: deary I've got yours done and completeled. Its good, so I hope I wasn't too harsh but with some editing you'll be grand, great even! Thanks for the request.

Anyone else to be served? Throw them at me, I'll eat them. And of course, serve you something else.

Hi Kagi, would you be willing to look at my latest poem? Here's the link:
Less than or equal at nineteen
Thank you so much

Alright, Nightsahe your poem is done and finished. Sorry, I dumped a boatload of reading on you but I hope I helped some.

Alright, I have a nice fresh salmon here anyone?

Hey there, Kagi. :) Wanna take a crack at this?

Lumi yours is finished... I hope I was somewhat helpful...

Next?!

hai Kagi! I am here to request a review from you!
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Please and thank you!!!
I appreciate it.

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Pleaseeee?!
I'll swap you - I'll review something of yours if you like

*opens menu* I would like a novel review please

It's General Fiction although I wonder if it would do better in Romance. Either way here you go novel.php?id=1419

I would really like a review on chapter three or four so maybe you could skim through the first chapters so you know what's going on? I would still be glad to have reviews on one or two if that's what you want to do.

Thank you so much in advance!
I am perfectly happy to give you a review in return. Just post a link at the bottom of your review or PM me one and I will get to ASAP.

Bye!

The Kaginator is finished, finito, hé terminado!

So, who likes molten chocolate cake?

Kagi wrote:So, who likes molten chocolate cake?

Who doesn't?


*Grins* Because I just know how much you love reading and reviewing my stuff...

To stop my head from exploding due to all of my exams, I took a break and edited the latest part of my novel a few nights ago. So. Would you be ever so kind and check it out for me? There's a brief summary at the top of the post, so you should more or less know what's going on from that.

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Please and thank you!

I would greatly appreciate if you would review this for me, it's a very short story:

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Also I have a romance novel in the works, but it's 18+ so I won't ask you to review that if you're not comfortable with that. (It's actually sort of surprising that I'm even writing it, since I'm pretty innocent myself. My fourteen-year-old sister calls me the innocent one! o.0)

Please and thank you!
*goes away to do more reviews*

~Blue

If you have time, can you please review my poem?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic82977.html
Thank you in advance!