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Thu Apr 14, 2011 2:14 pm
BerlynnRae says...



viewtopic.php?t=78995

Here's chapter one of "The Effect". you may review it but a lot of people have and I really need chapter 2/3 reviewed. This is just to give you some background info.
  





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Wed May 04, 2011 4:20 pm
Kagi says...



Rae, I'm done with yours. Good luck with everything! :s
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Sat May 07, 2011 4:45 pm
Glauke says...



RAWR!
I just posted... whatever this is, and I'd like a review. It's really unorganized, just thoughts as they came to me. Maybe they could be something, one day.
If you're up to it ;): post859152.html#p859152
Yours, Pen
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behind the clouds is the sun still shining
  





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Mon May 16, 2011 7:26 pm
Kagi says...



Penprincess: deary I've got yours done and completeled. Its good, so I hope I wasn't too harsh but with some editing you'll be grand, great even! Thanks for the request.

Anyone else to be served? Throw them at me, I'll eat them. And of course, serve you something else. ;)
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Sat May 21, 2011 5:11 am
Nightshade says...



Hi Kagi, would you be willing to look at my latest poem? Here's the link:
Less than or equal at nineteen
Thank you so much :)
  





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Sat May 21, 2011 8:35 pm
Kagi says...



Alright, Nightsahe your poem is done and finished. Sorry, I dumped a boatload of reading on you but I hope I helped some.

Alright, I have a nice fresh salmon here anyone?
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Sun May 22, 2011 10:36 am
Lumi says...



Hey there, Kagi. :) Wanna take a crack at this?
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sat May 28, 2011 11:40 am
Kagi says...



Lumi yours is finished... I hope I was somewhat helpful...

Next?!
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Sun Jun 05, 2011 3:23 pm
LadySpark says...



hai Kagi! I am here to request a review from you!
viewtopic.php?t=81233
Please and thank you!!!
I appreciate it.
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Formerly SparkToFlame
  





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Sun Jun 05, 2011 6:56 pm
Emmzziee says...



post869980.html#p869980

Pleaseeee?! :D
I'll swap you - I'll review something of yours if you like :D
I want to play a game.
  





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Sun Jun 05, 2011 9:20 pm
LittlePrincess says...



*opens menu* I would like a novel review please :)

It's General Fiction although I wonder if it would do better in Romance. Either way here you go novel.php?id=1419

I would really like a review on chapter three or four so maybe you could skim through the first chapters so you know what's going on? I would still be glad to have reviews on one or two if that's what you want to do.

Thank you so much in advance!
I am perfectly happy to give you a review in return. Just post a link at the bottom of your review or PM me one and I will get to ASAP.

Bye!
"One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes."
The Little Prince
  





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Thu Jun 16, 2011 9:28 am
Kagi says...



The Kaginator is finished, finito, hé terminado!

So, who likes molten chocolate cake? :lol:
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Tue Jun 21, 2011 2:35 pm
Sins says...



Kagi wrote:So, who likes molten chocolate cake? :lol:

Who doesn't?


*Grins* Because I just know how much you love reading and reviewing my stuff...

To stop my head from exploding due to all of my exams, I took a break and edited the latest part of my novel a few nights ago. So. Would you be ever so kind and check it out for me? There's a brief summary at the top of the post, so you should more or less know what's going on from that.

viewtopic.php?t=81113

Please and thank you! ;)
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Tue Jun 21, 2011 8:54 pm
BluesClues says...



I would greatly appreciate if you would review this for me, it's a very short story:

topic82916.html

Also I have a romance novel in the works, but it's 18+ so I won't ask you to review that if you're not comfortable with that. (It's actually sort of surprising that I'm even writing it, since I'm pretty innocent myself. My fourteen-year-old sister calls me the innocent one! o.0)

Please and thank you!
*goes away to do more reviews*

~Blue
  





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Wed Jun 22, 2011 7:37 am
cupcake says...



If you have time, can you please review my poem?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic82977.html
Thank you in advance!
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