Hello! If you could, I would love for you to review this: topic76997.html I'm sorry it's really long... Anything helps though. It's kind of general fiction as of now, I'm not really sure which direction I'm going to take it in.
Thanks!! -Once
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Hello If you have time could you check out my next chapter? It has no reviews yet *sniffle*
(Casey saves Chuck mid-fall off a building) Chuck: You... You... Casey: Yeah, I catch you when you fall. It's touching. Really. Chuck: No, no, I love you! Casey: Keep it in your pants, Bartowski.
Thanks for the review! It was really helpful -the word scow was meant to be slow *stupid typos!! - If you can review the next chapter I just posted it topic77898.html
(Casey saves Chuck mid-fall off a building) Chuck: You... You... Casey: Yeah, I catch you when you fall. It's touching. Really. Chuck: No, no, I love you! Casey: Keep it in your pants, Bartowski.
Hey Aunt Spit! If you have the time, I'd like some feedback on this. Thanks!
There are two kinds of folks who sit around thinking about how to kill people: psychopaths and mystery writers. I'm the kind that pays better. ~Rick Castle
Hey, could you review this: novel.php?id=1228 I have a lot more written, I just haven't posted it yet...I'd appreciate it TONS if you could review! Thanks SO much!
Have I not commanded thee? Be strong and of good courage; be not afraid, neither be thou dismayed, for the lord thy God is with thee whithersoever thou goest.
(Casey saves Chuck mid-fall off a building) Chuck: You... You... Casey: Yeah, I catch you when you fall. It's touching. Really. Chuck: No, no, I love you! Casey: Keep it in your pants, Bartowski.
Hey I was wondering if you'd be interested in reading the beginning of my novel, because of your interest in fantasy. Its in the advanced critiques but i have the first three chapters posted there as well, and as publishers ask to look at your first three or so chapters i'm extra concerned over those. By all means, though, read only as much as you want and take your time with it, as i understand your busy and its a bit long. Thanks a million! topic70200.html
"It may be cowardly to avoid trouble, but tis foolish to ask for it." -Last Knight
"I've never been helpless. I just have powerful enemies!"-Eragon
"Just another boring day saving the universe."-Obi-Wan
"Guacamole? What could be worse than guacamole?"-Percy
If you have the time, I'd like some feedback on
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