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Wed Mar 02, 2011 12:01 am
onceuponatim3xo says...



Hello! If you could, I would love for you to review this: topic76997.html I'm sorry it's really long... Anything helps though. It's kind of general fiction as of now, I'm not really sure which direction I'm going to take it in.

Thanks!! :wink:
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Wed Mar 02, 2011 7:01 pm
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There you go Once, hope I helped :)
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Mon Mar 14, 2011 8:44 pm
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Anybody else? :D
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Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:18 pm
IcyFlame says...



Hello :) If you have time could you check out my next chapter? It has no reviews yet *sniffle* :(
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Mon Mar 21, 2011 3:31 am
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It's done, Icy :)
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Mon Mar 21, 2011 6:55 am
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Thanks for the review! It was really helpful -the word scow was meant to be slow *stupid typos!! - If you can review the next chapter I just posted it :)
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Sat Mar 26, 2011 11:56 pm
Ranger Hawk says...



Hey Aunt Spit! :mrgreen: If you have the time, I'd like some feedback on this. Thanks! :D
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Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:14 am
psudiname says...



Could you review my first two novel chapters? It's a fantasy novel, and the links are below. thanks!
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if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.




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Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:51 pm
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Icy: it's done. RH, part 1 and 2 are done. Psudiname, I'm getting to you next ;)
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Wed Mar 30, 2011 4:09 am
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Hey, could you review this: novel.php?id=1228
I have a lot more written, I just haven't posted it yet...I'd appreciate it TONS if you could review! :) Thanks SO much!
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Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:40 pm
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If you could review this that'd be great :)
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Wed Apr 06, 2011 2:38 pm
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All righty, Psudiname, Matthews and Icy, they're done :smt003
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Thu Apr 28, 2011 2:42 am
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Finally finished it Cthulhu ;)
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Sat Apr 30, 2011 11:57 am
brassnbridle says...



Hey I was wondering if you'd be interested in reading the beginning of my novel, because of your interest in fantasy. Its in the advanced critiques but i have the first three chapters posted there as well, and as publishers ask to look at your first three or so chapters i'm extra concerned over those. By all means, though, read only as much as you want and take your time with it, as i understand your busy and its a bit long. Thanks a million!
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