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Sat Apr 30, 2011 4:55 pm
IcyFlame says...



I feel bad for constantly posting on here :(
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(Casey saves Chuck mid-fall off a building)
Chuck: You... You...
Casey: Yeah, I catch you when you fall. It's touching. Really.
Chuck: No, no, I love you!
Casey: Keep it in your pants, Bartowski.




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Tue May 24, 2011 1:38 pm
Spitfire says...



Finished everything a while ago..

Anyone want a review? 8)
Got a story you'd like reviewed?
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Punctuation is the difference between "Let's eat, Grandma" and "Let's eat Grandma".




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Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:25 pm
Lofty says...



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Please can you review this for me?
I can't put the two chapters I have done into one novel because I am not very good with YWS, so if you want to read the other chapter, it is in my portfolio under '[untitled novel]'.
The two chapters are similar, but I just wanted to show the same events through different characters eyes.
Lofty >.<
"Dream your dreams with open eyes, and make them come true"




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Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:46 pm
Rascalover says...



I need a review please

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It's romantic fiction.
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html