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Thu Jan 20, 2011 10:24 pm
Master_Yoda says...



Okay, Everyone is done! :)
I've got one more review requested by PM, and then I'm free.

Anyone else want a review?
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

I review your reviews: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=94522




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Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:16 am
confetti says...



Hey, Hi, Hello Yoda. I just sorta stumbled upon this today, and I was wondering if the offer is still up for grabs.
You see, I have this story - http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post892041.html#p892041 , and I'd love a review from you. Feel free to be honest, don't sugar coat. If you have time of course, no worries if you don't. And if you'd ever like a review from me, I'd love to.
"So the writer who breeds more words than he needs, is making a chore for the reader who reads."
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Fri Jul 29, 2011 3:10 pm
Master_Yoda says...



Your review's done, Confetti.

Hope it helped :)
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

I review your reviews: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=94522




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Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:08 pm
Jas says...



Hi,

Could I please get a review on this?

post894922.html#p894922

Thanks so much!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:37 pm
Master_Yoda says...



Yours is done, Jas! :)
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

I review your reviews: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=94522




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Sun Aug 14, 2011 4:21 pm
pettybage says...



A novel review of plot and tension please, much obliged:
topic85896.html
(speculative; 35K; half of story arc completed)




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Fri Aug 26, 2011 3:39 am
joshuapaul says...



A Critique, I request good sir!

topic86584.html
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Fri Aug 26, 2011 7:58 pm
Priceless says...



Hola!
Can you please review the first chapter of my novel? viewtopic.php?t=84706 Thanks so so much.
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Sun Sep 04, 2011 10:31 pm
Master_Yoda says...



Pettybage is done, joshuapaul, you're next.
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

I review your reviews: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=94522