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The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews open

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Tue Dec 14, 2010 1:33 pm

LadySpark says...

everyone else is going to have to wait for a while

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:11 pm

Button says...

If you have some time, could you please take a look at this?
topic73251.html

I read that it'll be a while, and that's totally fine. Take your time, all that you need.

Thanks so much!

-Coral-

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Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:13 am

emoinpink says...

Hey will you review this: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic72883.html it's a General Fiction Short Story, you didn't specify anything about that category so I thought I'd just ask. Thanks!

We're fools whether we dance or not, so we might as well dance.-Japanese Proverb

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Tue Jan 04, 2011 7:59 pm

LadySpark says...

ALL DONE!

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:02 am

Nightshade says...

Hi, would you be willing to review my latest poem?
topic74229.html
Thanks!

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Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:57 am

ErBear says...

Pointe! Hello!

If you don't mind, sir, I'd enjoy if you could review this chapter of my work...

viewtopic.php?t=73950

Thank you kindly! XD

(PS- I can take a :X... barely.)

~formerly Ilovebubbles123

"There's only one thing
to do
three words
for you.
Ooh, I love you.

There's only one way
to say
those three words
that's what I'll do.
Ooh, I love you. "

For you.

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Fri Jan 07, 2011 4:16 pm

LadySpark says...

taylor and Nightshade, done!

any other takers???

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:08 pm

LadySpark says...

doesn't anyone want a review from yours truly?

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:21 pm

LadySpark says...

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

Gender:

Points: 2099
Reviews: 355

Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:11 pm

LadySpark says...

Newly edited. Fresh new look for a fresh new year!

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:49 pm

LadySpark says...

doesn't anyone want a review?????????? please???? *sobs sadly*

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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Tue Jan 18, 2011 6:02 pm

Azila says...

Aw! What a lonely thread. :(

I've just posted something and if you feel like telling me what you think of it, I would appreciate that. It's a Sci-fi flash fiction. Please feel free to be mirthless.

Thanks!

Last edited by Azila on Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:51 pm

LadySpark says...

done! any other takers???

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

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Formerly SparkToFlame

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Sun Jan 23, 2011 7:18 pm

TabbyGirl says...

I'll take one, please!

viewtopic.php?t=74980

I'd like you to review this "overall." I typed it in Word, so there shouldn't be any grammar errors. However, if you see any, please let me know

THANKS!

--
Tabby

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Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:27 pm

LadySpark says...

Tabby Done, any more takers?

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame

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