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Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:57 pm
LadySpark says...



Welcome to the One- Stop Critique Shop, where you can purchase Spark's reviews-- for free! It's a steal, so be sure to take her up on one of these offers right now!

What She'll Review-
+Poetry
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+Short Stories
+Novels*
+Articles and Essays

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Let it be noted that I am a very busy person, and it might take awhile for me to get to your piece. I apologize in advance for any review that might take longer than it should.

*With novels, I may choose not to follow the novel after the third chapter-- If you're asking for a novel follow vs. a chapter review, please note.
Last edited by LadySpark on Sat Feb 23, 2013 6:01 pm, edited 26 times in total.
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:56 pm
Flower~Child says...



Will you review a poem for me? topic71564.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

  





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Fri Nov 05, 2010 11:24 pm
emmylou1995 says...



Hey! Will you review these for me?

viewtopic.php?t=71461
and
viewtopic.php?t=71523
and if you are able and are up to it,
viewtopic.php?t=70788
and
viewtopic.php?t=71036
When all you have is nothing, there is alot to go around.
  





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Wed Nov 17, 2010 4:25 pm
Nike says...



Hiya. I scanned this and I want you to review a couple of things!
If you want to that is ;)

The List - Fantasy Novel (review the first part only, that's all I wrote so far)
viewtopic.php?t=72014

Around The World: America to Poland - General Fiction Novel (the chapter reveiw.)
viewtopic.php?t=71879

Prom Disaster - Romantic Short Story (I don't know if I should continue it.)
viewtopic.php?t=71511

Hate or Love? - Romantic Short Story
viewtopic.php?t=70408

Friendship Reunion - Romantic Short Story
topic70153.html

Teenager's World - General Fiction Novel (There are two parts this one and Teenager's World (1) )
viewtopic.php?t=69819

Totally Strange - Romantic Novels
viewtopic.php?t=67349

I know, it's alot! I just want some reviews from you!
Nike :)
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Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:01 am
Roal says...



Hey there! Can you please review my novel: The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer? Thanks

topic70833.html ( There are 3 ( kind of ) chapters in total and I would like you to read them all, if you have time. )

The links to the others will be display on the bottom of Ch. 1
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.
  





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Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:13 pm
LadySpark says...



Come on guys! do I have to beg?
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


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Mon Nov 29, 2010 1:58 pm
LadySpark says...



PLLLLLLLLLLLEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSE
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


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Tue Nov 30, 2010 12:28 pm
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awwwwwwwwwwww come on! I'm on my knees now!
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


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Wed Dec 01, 2010 3:53 pm
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Sins says...



You could review this for me, point?

novel.php?id=781

It's the first three parts of my novel. Considering it is three parts, you don't have to do it if you don't want to! I just thought that it might be able to keep you busy. xD

As for chapters or overall review... Um.. I don't mind. Do whichever one you like doing best!

Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Tue Dec 07, 2010 1:01 pm
LadySpark says...



done skins....
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Thu Dec 09, 2010 1:22 pm
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PLEASE ASK FOR THE REVIEWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Sun Dec 12, 2010 6:21 am
MiaParamore says...



Hey Point! I would love your review for this: Know I'm Here I don't want the prologue to be reviewed, it's been reviewed thoroughly earlier, but you need to read it. :D

Thanks,
Shubhi

P.S. Ask me when you need more. xD!
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Mon Dec 13, 2010 5:31 am
IsebellaLynnette says...



Hey there, Pointe! :D

Like Shubhi, I will give you a chance to review. So there's this prologue/first chapter of my NaNo that I posted (I haven't yet decided whether it really will be a prologue or whether it will become the first chapter), and I'd like another opinion on it, if you would please. Seeing as how you were begging for the reviews earlier, I don't think that should be too much of a problem. :)

Against All Odds
It's a mix between action and fantasy--it's set in a medieval world a bit different from what ours was like.

Also--thank you in advance. :)

PS: I might not post the rest of my NaNo, so feel free to do any sort of review you want. Whatever floats your boat. ;)
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Mon Dec 13, 2010 8:46 pm
narniafreak12 says...



Hi! I'm Narniafreak! And I'd like a review if you have time.

My novel is Igneous Rock [working on a better title]
It has a prologue and two parts of chapter one. If you want, I'd like a review on all parts, but if you don't have time please review at least chapter one.

Novel link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=311
Prologue link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53301.html
Chapter one part 1 link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56565.html
Chapter one part 2 link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56926.html

Oh, and I have changed a lot of things in most of it, but I haven't posted them yet because I'm waiting until I write more. So, sorry if it sucks. :)

Thanks a ton!

-Narniafreak!
  





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Tue Dec 14, 2010 12:43 am
HostofHorus says...



Howdy! Could you review this poem for me? I would be very honored to have a critique by Mr. Pointe, I have seen your work, and it has been impressive. :) Thanks in advance!

topic73168.html
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)
  








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