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Sun Jan 16, 2011 7:41 pm
LittlePrincess says...



Hi!
I was wondering if you could review my story, topic74886.html
It's for school so comments are greatly appreciated. Thank you so much!

~Little Princess
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Thu Feb 03, 2011 3:23 pm
Jash says...



DONE!

bring it all people!!!!!!!!!! :D
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Sat Feb 26, 2011 5:27 am
Jas says...



topic76823.html

Please :D


I might have something else in a couple of minutes if that's alright :)
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Sat Feb 26, 2011 5:28 am
Jas says...



topic76804.html

That too please :)

THANKIES!!!!! :D
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Sat Feb 26, 2011 10:51 am
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Gotcha girl... is it OK if I do this on Review Day? :D One day isn't much of a diff, right? :D
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Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:58 am
ChocolateMoonLight says...



Hey! Jash

Please review this- topic87266.html#p912384
It's the edited version of the new novel I'm working on, about which I was talking to you earlier...

Thanks!!!!

-moon-
Spoiler! :
Checkout the different shades of sunset...
topic84708.html


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Mon Sep 12, 2011 11:19 am
Jash says...



Done. =)
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Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:08 pm
Justlittleoleme says...



Hey There Jash,

I would be honored if you swing on over and check this little adventure story I just cooked up. It is not yet finished but is looking to become the first story I've ever brought to completion, I would love it if you would review its progress so far:

topic87101.html#p911137

and if you feel inclined to and have the time I would be equally honored if you would review on of my poems as well:

topic87536.html#p914419

They are not quite what one would call impressive but, in my opinion, have potential, the kind of potential that only a well constructed review can bring out in a story,

Thanks in advance,

-Justlittleoleme




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Wed Sep 14, 2011 12:54 am
Jash says...



I'll see what I can do. =))
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Thu Sep 22, 2011 12:30 am
Justlittleoleme says...



Thanks soooo much for the review JASK! XD XD XD




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Thu Sep 22, 2011 3:39 am
Jash says...



You're welcome! But I'm still trying to find the time to review the prose one. =)) I'll get to it, kay? =D
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Sun Sep 25, 2011 3:28 am
Justlittleoleme says...



Kay! Its cool, take your time...technically its not even finished yet -_- :wink:




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Sun Sep 25, 2011 4:24 am
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I'll try my best to do it today. XD For review day. LOL
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Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:14 pm
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Hey jash, since you say... topic88067.html
The moment you say that one set of moral ideas can be better than another, you are, in fact, measuring them both by a standard, saying that one of them conforms to that standard more nearly than the other. C. S. Lewis

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Sun Oct 02, 2011 7:24 am
SerenityCross says...



Hey. I have been writing this novel for a while and I've just edited all the chapters I have posted and I will add a couple of new chapters and I would like someone to review it from the beginning.
novel.php/id=1528
Thanks, I would really appreciate it!!
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