I withdraw my request and will come back at a later date with something from the short story forums, cheers I withdraw my request and will come back at a later date with something from the short story forums, cheers
napalmerski wrote:Thank you Jashie!
kidashka wrote:Hi,
I saw your picture of Taylor Swift in Art&Photography, and wondered if you could critique some of my art? You're so good, I want to steal all of your drawing tips! *_*
I'd be happy to review any of your stuff as a thankyou - if there's anything in particular just tell me!
[/quote][quote=jennyr]Hey! You're so nice for doing this.
Could you take a look at my novella? I'd greatly appreciate feedback. The first chapter is a little choppy, flow-wise, but after that it smoothes out.
Title: Captive
Genre: Historical/Romance
Summary: In the cold, isolated forests of 16th-century Europe, a lord takes a boy prisoner. As an unexpectedly tender relationship develops between captor and captive, resentment and distrust grow into warmth and trust in a pair of hearts that were once achingly empty. It aims to be a sensitive portrayal of a tender, if fragile, relationship that grows between two characters because of mutual loneliness as well as an intense longing for companionship. As a tentative trust develops between the two characters, the dynamics of their captor-captive relationship continually change as power is given, taken, and shared. As their bond deepens, the boy finds a new kind of freedom in his captivity and the man finds redemption for a brutal crime he committed.
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Thank you!
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