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Sun Oct 02, 2011 1:20 pm
Jash says...



SerenityCross wrote:Hey. I have been writing this novel for a while and I've just edited all the chapters I have posted and I will add a couple of new chapters and I would like someone to review it from the beginning.
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Thanks, I would really appreciate it!!
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Mon Oct 24, 2011 12:26 pm
JCK says...



Atlantis, the prologue. I just want some reviews on it because I've been really inspired for this novel lately, and am going to write it over the next few months, (in between exams-and-what-now). It's a sci-fantasy, and I hope you like it!
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Fri Nov 04, 2011 1:21 pm
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Hey there:) Could you please review my poem? Thanks in advance. It's not long;)
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Tue Nov 08, 2011 4:49 pm
Gheala says...



This is an excerpt from my crime/romance novel. I do hope it's an emotional piece:
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Thu Nov 10, 2011 2:23 pm
Jash says...



*coughclosedcough*

But I'll do those! It will just take... some time. OK, a lot.
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