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Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:36 pm
Sionarama says...



OH OH OHHHHH!!! I HAVE ONE!! CHOSE ME OVER HERE!!
okay. Now that I've got your attention, I'd like you to review my work:
An Ode to the Ocean
and
After Adonis
or any others..
thanks!!
CHOW FOR NOW,
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Mon Jul 12, 2010 7:00 pm
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pinkangel54123 says...



I was just wondering if you would review my fantasy novel for me. The links in my signature and it's quite long-7 chapters-so I'll give you umm...does 1000 points sound okay? Please do this for me!

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Mon Jul 12, 2010 7:35 pm
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GuntaFX says...



Hey,
Was wondering if you could review my short story in return for points, a high five and some good karma :smt002 .

Title - Around The Fur
Genre - General Short Story
viewtopic.php?t=66782
Feel free to tear it a new one.
Appreciated

Lewis




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Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:31 pm
*coco says...



Sionarama - you didn't put up a link! :(

Diane - I'll be starting yours soon :D

Gunta - your's is complete. Thanks for the request :smt003
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Tue Jul 13, 2010 12:54 am
Skeen says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic66885.html


got chapter 3 and 4 up of Gaurdian if you'd be willing to review it. I'd definatly appriciate it :)

peace out.
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Thu Jul 15, 2010 2:42 pm
*coco says...



Skeen - your review is complete! An ivisible high five for your request :D

Diane - your review is complete :)

Sionarama - I think I've found your story - I'll be on it soon
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Tue Jul 20, 2010 12:31 am
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Shearwater says...



Hi Coco, it's me, wondering if you had time to review a piece I'm working on.
Pretty please? I'll give you points! I don't even use them lol
Here's the Link: topic67137.html
It's Fantasy though...lol
Thank you!

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Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:06 am
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Prosithion says...



Hey, I was wondering if you could critique a scene from my novella 'In Defense of Our Nation'.

I would suggest scene 1, but I'll leave that up to you.

novel.php?id=461

It's speculative science fiction.

Thanks,
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Tue Jul 20, 2010 6:30 pm
GeeLyria says...



Hi, *coco*! Would you like to review this for me topic67210.html , is a romantic novel, but the grammar is really bad. I've already read it out loud a million times, but since my first language is Spanish I can't catch those mistakes. :| Thanks! :)
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Sat Aug 14, 2010 10:16 pm
*coco says...



Pink, Pro and Slovalery all three of your works have been reviewed, an invisible high five for the requests!

May I have the pleasure of reviewing anyone else's work? Come on now...don't be shy... :D
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Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:11 am
seeminglymeaningless says...



Hey :) This piece isn't mine, but it has hardly any reviews, and it's a REALLY good story in terms of plot. I would really like some attention drawn to it, so could you please review it?

topic67862.html

Thanks!




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Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:34 pm
*coco says...



Seamingly, your request is complete. Thanks for the read :D

Anybody else need a review?
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕




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Tue Aug 24, 2010 11:54 am
*coco says...



Anyone at all?
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Sun Oct 31, 2010 8:16 pm
*coco says...



Anyone? :(
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Mon Nov 01, 2010 2:54 am
napalmerski says...



Me, please, me topic71337.html
grabbing at the 'occasionaly' concerning your reviewing of sci-fi. I think in places it's literary enough to placate a cyborg-denialist :D Short story collection, I don't insist you do all 10 stories, can jump over some, or pick some at random if you like. Thanx
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