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Wed Aug 18, 2010 11:14 pm
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NYCnightowl007 says...



Hello Shubhi! Would you be so kind as so review my novel for me? novel.php?id=550 There are two and a half chapters, as I split the third in two and I am not done with the second half yet. If two (and a half) chapters is too many just PM me. Much appreciated! :D
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Fri Aug 20, 2010 1:37 pm
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MiaParamore says...



Wow. So many requests for Shubhi and she would be glad to do them all.

As for now, Pink yours is fully complete. Let me know when you need more reviews. I am always open, till now. :)

Others: I would do them once my computer is fixed. Thanks but by the way.

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Wed Aug 25, 2010 2:35 pm
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Shearwater says...



Hey friend, It's me again :3
I posted the fifth chapter of Taboo, can you please review?
I had a hard time with this one >.<
topic68651.html
Thanks,

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Wed Aug 25, 2010 3:56 pm
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MiaParamore says...



Hey all.

Didn't get time to update this forum. Yeah, so I am done with Black's first chapter, and as well as NYC's.

Pudins whole thing is complete.

And yeah I finished yours too Pink.

Yupiee, I am great. But more to go. :smt002
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Sat Aug 28, 2010 7:43 pm
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Sins says...



Heyaa, Shubhi :)

I've posted the next chapter of my story and I'd love for you to review it for me! It's quite a long chapter, so I hope you won't mind. Please and thank you!

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Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:50 am
MiaParamore says...



Oh yeah, I have done yours Skins.

P.S. I haven't forgotten about you, Black, and NYC. Going on get on them very soon.
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Sun Aug 29, 2010 11:48 pm
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Crimsona says...



Hey there! :) I was wondering if you'd be ever so kind in reviewing my novel for me. It's genre is something along the lines of adventure, though it does have some philosophy mixed in (not so much in the first few chapters though), so really I'm not quite sure what the genre is, but it is mostly a children's book.

Lakea and her siblings are bound together by a prophesy, a prophesy that they will bring peace to the land that has been split in two for so long. On their journey to find peace, they will discover that there are more important things than war and will encounter life, love and the harshness of death on their way.

There we go! Now here's the link:
novel.php?id=592

I only have two chapters up so far, but if you were to review them... I'd be so grateful!
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Tue Aug 31, 2010 3:06 am
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Shearwater says...



Hi shubs!
I just posted another chapter of taboo, if your still interested.
topic68922.html
thanks in advance!!

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Tue Aug 31, 2010 3:26 pm
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retrodisco666 says...



topic68942.html

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Mon Sep 06, 2010 6:03 am
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Shearwater says...



Hey Shubs, I posted chapter seven of Taboo, if you wanna check it out :)
post760372.html#p760372
Much love,

~Pink
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Sat Sep 11, 2010 7:02 am
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MiaParamore says...



I am done with all of Pink's request, and Skins' request. I hope to get done the other requests, soon. Till then, I am not taking anymore requests, until or unless you can wait for three weeks. :D

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Wed Oct 13, 2010 4:50 am
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MiaParamore says...



REQUEST AGAIN~ Coz' I am accepting them again. :)
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Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:19 am
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MiaParamore says...



I AM working on Crims' work but that doesn't mean you won't ask me for reviews. I start to review again. So PLEASE!
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Thu Oct 21, 2010 4:03 pm
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Jashael says...



Hi, Shubhi! As requested, I'm requesting here. Please review me! Thansk =))

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Thu Oct 21, 2010 11:25 pm
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FRAYEDjade says...



Hey there. You do poems right?
I've got a time sensitive poem here I'd really love reviews on --> viewtopic.php?t=70928

Before October 28th would be great.
Thank you!
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