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Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:31 pm
MiaParamore says...



Done!

Next, please? :wink:
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Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:19 pm
AlexWaterfall says...



work.php?id=94331 could you do this for me please?
  





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Sun Apr 01, 2012 1:13 am
Wicki says...



Hello! :D
I'm trying to get some different reviews from different people on my untitled dystopian/science fiction book.
If you have time, could you please review it? :) work.php?id=94353
  





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Thu Apr 05, 2012 3:24 pm
summergrl13 says...



work.php?id=94462

I would really appreciate reviews :D so far I have none, and I really wanna go somewhere with this piece so could someone PLEASE review it? I'll review a work of yours in return :)
I will review for you! PM about it if you need one!


Come check out my new story at topic53543.html
  





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Fri Apr 06, 2012 2:19 am
Shady says...



Hi, this isn't a novel or anything. I've only recently grown confident enough with my writing to post anything, and this is my first short story...Sorry if it's bad. :|
work.php?id=94510

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Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:56 am
MiaParamore says...



Done with Wicki and Vyper. I'll get to SUmmer ASAP.

Alex: Your link isn't working this way, so would you min posting it again?
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:30 am
nutmegan595 says...



This is the first chapter of my novel. When you're done I'll post the second if you can't find it.
work.php?id=85686
  





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Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:38 pm
Threnody says...



Hello! Could you please review my short story Motion in a Minute? Thanks so much and I'll return the favor.

Threnody
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Sat Apr 07, 2012 8:56 pm
hockeyfan87 says...



work.php?id=94449 Heres the link(:
when you grow up you realize that Prince Charming is not as easy to find as you thought. You realize the bad guy is not wearing a black cape and he's not easy to spot; he's really funny, and he makes you laugh, and he has perfect hair and isnt wearing a black cape and easy to spot Lots of Love Jenn
  





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Mon Apr 09, 2012 6:18 pm
Shearwater says...



Miaaa <3

I've posted the new chapter of Exodus. I decided to ask for a review here. :3

Thank you!
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Fri Apr 13, 2012 5:00 pm
MiaParamore says...



I've got your requests, guys, but my computer has died on me so the reviews are gonna take time.

But I'll get to each one, I swear. :)

Till the forum is officially closed. ^_^
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Tue Apr 24, 2012 4:16 am
MiaParamore says...



I am done with the reviews except for Threnody's which I am going to post this evening.

So, I am taking requests. :)
"Next time you point a finger
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:07 am
Ikerot says...



I just rewrote this so: work.php?id=94631
<3

It's a fantasy/scifi genre. This is just part one of it.
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Wed Apr 25, 2012 1:35 am
lilymoore says...



The Lottery Winner. It's just a short story/the intro to my game design project.
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Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:46 pm
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Jalmoc says...



Hi there Paramore! :D I was wondering if you would review my first chapter of a Star Wars FanFic I've been working on. There's not much to it, but I'd be open for ideas, and I really hope you catch anything that I've missed. :) So if you feel like reviewing, here it is. :D

work.php?id=94948
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