Young Writers Society

Home » Forums » Resources » Will Review For Food

Bring it on! (Open)

Post a reply
User avatar
552 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 58198
Reviews: 552
Mon Dec 19, 2011 6:14 pm
MiaParamore says...



All done, guys. Thanks a lot. :D

Any one else?
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




User avatar
12 Reviews


Gender: Male
Points: 562
Reviews: 12
Tue Dec 20, 2011 4:28 am
Taxi says...



Hey! Hate to ask for another review so soon, but you mentioned that you could review fiction, and uh... well I've got some fiction for you. :D

viewtopic.php?t=91662

If it's too much to ask for now, just let me know and I'll ask again later.
Man vs Toddler
My previous username was Lyricalias.




User avatar
66 Reviews


Gender: Male
Points: 2974
Reviews: 66
Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:48 pm
AlfonsoFernandez says...



Hello, I have a fantasy story that I would love to have reviewed as critically as possible. It's called Achilles. Thank you! :D
"True glory consists in doing what deserves to be written; in writing what deserves to be read."
- Pliny the Elder

[insert inspiring quote]




User avatar
552 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 58198
Reviews: 552
Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:49 am
MiaParamore says...



Update: Through with Lyrica's piece. I'll get to Alfonso's ASAP. ^_^
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




User avatar
25 Reviews


Gender: Male
Points: 752
Reviews: 25
Fri Jan 06, 2012 11:16 am
Benrobertringrose says...



Hello, could you possibly review this short story for me?
viewtopic.php?f=6&t=92344

Much appreciated! :)
Ben.




User avatar


Gender: None specified
Points: 650
Reviews: 0
Sat Jan 21, 2012 10:44 am
Rika says...



Hello MiaParamore,
I am new to YWS. The atmosphere around here is very inspiring. I couldn't stop myself from posting my work. I have written an article on Euthanasia;it's pros and cons under the General Articles category of the non-fiction section. I would be immensely grateful If you put forward your views about it. I would appreciate criticism as well! Thank you! :) I have given the link below -
viewtopic.php?f=388&t=92734




User avatar
35 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 3166
Reviews: 35
Thu Mar 15, 2012 5:42 am
View Likes
jemjive says...



Want to review a fellow Paramore fans work? Please :)
work.php?id=94012
Your motor's unstable,
Your like an
Undwinding
Cable
Car
.




User avatar
552 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 58198
Reviews: 552
Wed Mar 21, 2012 11:22 am
MiaParamore says...



Done! Who else needs more? I'm ready!
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




User avatar
9 Reviews


Gender: Male
Points: 58
Reviews: 9
Wed Mar 21, 2012 11:23 pm
TheSunChildren says...



Hi, i've asked a couple of people to read this now and like i have previously said i'd love as many people to have a look as possible to pick up on problems, so would you mind having a look at mine pleease? i'd be very grateful

I've already had a suggestion to make it easier to read and have taken out measures to do so, So, it's good that you review lengthy work,
work.php?id=94099
Not many remember how life there began, in the lands amidst surrounding walls of stone and pools of deep darkness, but whilst they forget the secrets of the past, they begin to riddle the future with their growing lust for knowledge, greatness and power.




User avatar
552 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 58198
Reviews: 552
Sat Mar 24, 2012 2:31 pm
MiaParamore says...



Done! Anyone else?
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




User avatar
12 Reviews


Gender: None specified
Points: 950
Reviews: 12
Sat Mar 24, 2012 2:35 pm
Pilot says...



What is the rate for your reviews, and are they taxed?

Sorry, but in this tight economy I have to try to get the best possible deals on everything that I can.
I don't always write on forums, but when I do, I prefer YWS.

Sharpen your pencil, my friends.




User avatar
552 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 58198
Reviews: 552
Sun Mar 25, 2012 7:44 am
View Likes
MiaParamore says...



Actually, my reviews are free. So, you need not bother about the economy and taxes. lol.

So, anyone fancies a review?
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




User avatar
256 Reviews


Gender: None specified
Points: 26635
Reviews: 256
Sun Mar 25, 2012 10:44 am
Baal says...



Will you review my work 'Great Entities- Chapter One' please? :D
It's about a kid named Curtis who acts as an envoy and, in some cases, assassin, of many, many powerful entities. He'll do whatever it takes for the greater good.
Thanks!
Formerly LouisCypher





Audii. Veni. Vici.



Ever thought that a song made just for your character would be epic? I can make that dream come true. Maybe, possibly.


Sheep.
Spoiler! :
"ooh, sheep music!"
- Niebla




User avatar
552 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 58198
Reviews: 552
Sun Mar 25, 2012 1:40 pm
MiaParamore says...



Done! Anyone else?
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




User avatar
494 Reviews


Gender: Male
Points: 21887
Reviews: 494