Young Writers Society

You've, like, totally changed your username. Awesome!

Anyways, when you find the time, could you please review my fantasy short story? It's insanely messy and illogical right now, so I'd appreciate some help to clean it up.

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Please and thank you!

You like Poetry.
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Have a short story. (It's the closest I might ever get to poetry)

Could I get a review on this poem?

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Damn how is this down on page 3 of WRFF?

Can you look at either of these
Lerra

or

Life after

Both horror, both new, both in need of a review. Of course I don't expect you to get to both (or either.)

JP

I'm in need of your analytic poetry prowess.

*bump*

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Hi, I'm not sure whether this falls into your acceptable reviews thingy but if it does, I would really appreciate a review! Don't worry if not though! Thank you!

Still open.

I never closed, actually.

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thanks.

Can you please review my fantasy novel/chapter? I only put the first chapter and the prologue. I haven't got any reviews yet.
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Thank you.

Finished Kafka's, working on kay's.

And finished kay's.

Me me me me me!

Please. c:

And done.